Thursday, February 19, 2009

Some senses broke down
when, it was bring into being
it’s too late sweetheart
you have fallen in the depth
and occupied forever..

52 comments:

comfortably numb said...

forever is a lie!!!

Abhishek Khanna said...

ye wala to mast samajh aa gaya :)

mayz said...

stop searchin for sense...

Amrita~Ams said...

i understood this oneliner in one read...:)

p.s: hugs mai bhi indori

ceedy said...

I agree with numb...forever is a lie cause the very realization that one has fallen in itself is a ray of hope

Smriti said...

hmmmmmmmmmm...interesting...sochna padega!!

peter said...

it somehow looks either incomplete or the sweetheart is in dilemma :P

WarmSunshine said...

sadness is beautiful... isn't it? there's some strange peace in it... i found that in these lines :)

Trinaa said...

n i agree with numb n ceedy!

Hobo ........ ........ ........ said...

Bounce above my head.

oo7 said...

sense is non-sense!!

Leo said...

mujhe pata hi nahin tha ki tu itne deep likhti ho! :)

Vyzz said...

shucks. that was goood.

Pooja said...

dat's absolutly b'ful!!!

Yayaver said...

charming...

Aneesh said...

Nothing's too late sweet heart :)
Will try to visit more often
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ numb
hmm..mayb

joiedevivre said...

@ abhishek
hehe
finally
meri mehnat safal hui..tujhe samaj aa gaya
great

joiedevivre said...

@ mayz
non sense ban jau
:P

joiedevivre said...

@ asmi
aare tu toh hai hi hoshiyaar engg
:

joiedevivre said...

@ ceedy
agar koi realize karna hi na chahe toh

joiedevivre said...

@ smriti
socho socho
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ peter
yeah it is somewhere incomplete..the whole love story will be written ahead now

joiedevivre said...

@ mehreen
i thot u wont b visitin...u were suppose to go for a break

but happy to see you here..
yeah *sadness is beautiful

joiedevivre said...

@ tiniii
the same ans to you
.
.
.
mayb

joiedevivre said...

@ hobo
jando jando
koi baat naii

and thanku soooo much for chole award..hehe

joiedevivre said...

@ vikram
and i kno why

joiedevivre said...

@ leo
padega toh pata chalega na :P
hehe

nyways your poems are far better

joiedevivre said...

@ vyzz
thanks
:D

joiedevivre said...

@ pooja
thankss
and y u disaapear?? xamz or somthing else

joiedevivre said...

@ yayaver
:)
:)
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ aneesh
hmm
and where are you??
very busy

ceedy said...

Na chaahe to the person will fall into the self aflicted "great depression" which in times of this "financial depression" one shld try and avoid

MultiMenon said...

yumm!!

Did ya miss a line btw?? :)

Nikhil

k.ø.c.h.ü said...

honestly speakin..i didnt understand anythin in de first read..perhapz itz coz im dozin off...gimme an explanation...signin off now..hope 2 grasp sumthin on another session :) by de time complete dis...(?)

Some senses broke down
when, "it was bring into being"?

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Resurgence said...

Gal... I do not know what to say on this.... but one thing is sure that whether one has fallen into the depths.. there are more reasons to hope rather than fall into the grips of despair......... :)

Aneesh said...

yup, pretty busy... Thanks buddy
:D

The Expression of an Expression! said...

I think have an explanation to it.
I have the right reason for the expression of every expression and you sound much similar man!

The Expression of an Expression! said...

I think you should once go through my blog. Wouldn't be half bad as an experience.

Iceman said...

mast hai ...

superb..

keep it up!

joiedevivre said...

@ ceedy
agar pata hi na chale aur fall ho jaye toh
..dnt mind my questions :P..just a probabilty

ceedy said...

To instead of Why Me? have an attitude Yes Only Me? take the lesson that was supposed to be learn't or maybe just observed and be ready for the next fall...keep asking - will answer till I think I can or say I fall :P into the trap unknowingly :P

joiedevivre said...

@ nikhil
no..its complete..
read between the lines

joiedevivre said...

@ kochu
concepts of miss brevity are getting to much isnt it??
catch u online sometime
till then
shoo shoo

joiedevivre said...

@ reusrgence
falling can be pleasing at times

joiedevivre said...

@ iceman
:D
:D

Hemanth Potluri said...

is it falling in love...

urs..hemu..

joiedevivre said...

@ hemz
yeah

enchanted illusionz said...

ha! hw some moments feel lik it is forever..is it ?
u hv written a whole luv story n jus few words, beautiful!

& thnkx 4 droppin by at ma place. :)

Som said...

the twisty way of writing is great to read .. leaving out the unnecessary .. nice work ..

joiedevivre said...

@ enchanted illusionz
this was ek choti si love story
:D

joiedevivre said...

@ som
thank u