Saturday, February 28, 2009

In Sighting


There was this strong unpleasant feeling, it was again a failed attempt for cusping life. Inadequate action or maybe lack of precision took the possession far away from him. Still it appeared annoyingly dainty and appealing. He got infected to the logic's now and tried to bring in more contamination till a dead lock is reached, this casted a morbid category of this being to get indulged into a sequence. This is a trap which had to begin somewhere but he didn’t knew, it was this and how. Preparations got hindered and continuously disturb the traumas which seriously hurt no more.
Pain was demanding more but it had no end to pleasure.

34 comments:

WarmSunshine said...

lovely play of words :)

loved the last line :)

Hobo ........ ........ ........ said...

Dictionary plz.
;)

Leo said...

do u know mayank by chance? :)

ur post reminded me of his letters!

good wordplay...
loved it joie! :)

Amrita~Ams said...

I read it twice to compile my logic :|

Resurgence said...

Gal... ab tak mujhe poems samajh nahi aate the ab to prose me bhi panga ho chala hai.... :)

Reminded me of my CSE days (Logic, deadlock, sequence, trap, failed... :) )

Well the attempt may not have failed due to those two reasons only... Don't you think there are many externalities associated with the success of any action... :)... Loved the last line though... :)

mayz said...

woosh!!!
thats d sound of this post goin above my head

Pooja said...

written lyk a pioneer...amazing!!!

ceedy said...

I guess you are in the process of love....and liked the pic

Randeep said...

Who? me! ahem.. logic... ya.. nice rhyming..

Cheers
Randeep

Keshi said...

Keep writing this beautifully as always Joi. See ya on another day. HUGZ byeee for now!

Keshi.

Roo-Ba-Roo said...

nice ... i like it.

everytime you come up with a fantastic post :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

it was beautiful ..

urs.hemu..

SMRITI said...

Ab to tu tuitions lena shuru kar de... theek se palle nahi pad raha :( :( Please "Decipher the De vivre Code" :)

Bhai with Chai said...

as usual.. loved the pic.. and whatever i could decipher of the text too!
:)

peter said...

samjh nahi aya nehaji u r turning in to 'the rums category' :P

par accha likha hai ruko fir se padhta hun ;)

joiedevivre said...

@ mehreen
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ hobo
abey yaarr..is it really that difficult

joiedevivre said...

@ vinay
hmm mayank?? yeh aapna blogger mayank ko i kno..

thankssss :D

joiedevivre said...

@ amrita
aacha finalyy samajh aaya ke nai

joiedevivre said...

@ resurgence
hehe...tum logo ke samajh kyu nai aa ra hai...??? :O

joiedevivre said...

@ maggie
tu bhi...tere bhi samajh nai aaya??

joiedevivre said...

@ pooja
m not a pionerr..just a simple human with complex emotional level

joiedevivre said...

@ ceedy
kaise pata m in love??

ceedy said...

First this line itself - you did not deny it - just questioned - so affirmation

and this for me "This is a trap which had to begin somewhere but he didn’t knew"

but again its my assumption or reading into it...cause i believe in the pain of love - a real sweet pain

joiedevivre said...

@ randeep
mr.logical...right
:P

joiedevivre said...

@ keshi
will miss you a lot
:(

joiedevivre said...

@ roo ba roo
dhanyawaad!!
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ hemzz
thank you
by the way, give me call when you are free.

joiedevivre said...

@ smriti
hehe
tuition ke liye milna bhi padta hai..time dena padta hai jo tumhare pass nai hai..bilkul bhi nai hai..
do you realize kitne din ho gaye aapni baat hue...miss india, invisible ho tum toh..

joiedevivre said...

@ bhaiya
:)) thanku
and how are you..long time

joiedevivre said...

@ pinku
no no no no
maritini is my category...rum pasand nai hai :P

Pooja said...

dat's called modesty!!!

joiedevivre said...

@ pooja
actally

aZoed said...

the last line... it's like the essence of our lives today... loved your abstract style...