Tuesday, February 3, 2009

crying Smile

"trying to slow down
reducing the intensity
it has now become difficult,
for me to manage too much of smile,
it makes my eyes wet.."

67 comments:

Nikita said...

u knw wat neha...
i have realised
-i have started understanding the beauty of your four liners...n this one is no exception
-gal...aint u getting a bit philosophical each passing day? growing up? huh? or already grown...?
-n how do u manage those apt pics...that is something really commendable..

n for this one...true its so difficult to live a artificial life......

Pranav Kumar V said...

No no no... let me understand first... does it mean what it means?? Or could it mean what we want it to mean?? Though its always what we want it to mean...

These are 'khushi ke aasoon' we're talking of here, right?? Because that's what my mind is bent towards understanding... See, being a man, people always try to find you in that ONE situation where you're crying... I do that always, out of joy, or I'm too sleepy and yawn too much... so the idiots think I cry (not that I really care!!) but it makes me wet wet wet!! So, I try to avoid!!

Go ahead... your version...

See you when I see you... :)

Sam said...

did i forsee valentine day coming up so so many smiles :)

comfortably numb said...

@above
I think d eyes becum wet coz of the forced nature of the smile.
@post
beautifully put...though do tell me whether I understood correct or not!!!

Hemanth Potluri said...

dont try to smile to much...:P...i am not joking...its good way ...but i am confused if its...wat i think :P..

urs..hemu..

Aditi Gupta said...

just be
dont try too hard
ull be fine :)

ceedy said...

Isnt it a irony....that when you laugh with all your heart...you have tears..

this is beautifully penned..and if I understand it...its meant to have a dual meaning

ani said...

this is a beautiful blog!!! :)

SMRITI said...

Beautiful... I thought about it and I guess it has a dual effect for me...Tears of Joy and Smile when in Pain. Either ways, they are such contrasting expressions...yet...

Nicely done :)

WarmSunshine said...

i can relate to that you know

short lines that say a lot
lovely as always :)

Amrita~Ams said...

oye..beutifully pen down ..
but tussi fine ho na???

ye rona shona kyu??

Roo-Ba-Roo said...

beautiful- your four liner's are amazing!!!
Keep smiling- its good to be burdened with smile

Randeep said...

well i didnt get it..Anyway keep smiling... nothing to lose by smiling..

Cheers
Randeep

Leo said...

joie is a four line wonder! she manages to get the beauty in so less words... amazes me every time!

wowie joie!

peter said...

it's quite apt and obvious if u dun read between the lines..!!

but since poems dun have any boundaries.. i see so much in it :D

gud wrk be ;)

G-Joe said...

mmm... no comments!

Priya Joyce said...

all'll be fine re

:)

V. Archana said...

y???

isssmmiillleeee na, yaar :)

Hobo ........ ........ ........ said...

Plastic smile melting down...

Resurgence said...

Gal.... this post got me confused... actually it can be interpreted in both the ways (If that's the beauty of the post).... but it is easy to refer it to sadness but at the same time one encounters the same when one laughs one's heart out too.... :)

digant sutar said...

Try one more thing "Don't try too hard"
Cos ur talking about intensity and that comes directly from inside,so that means ur trying to be,wat ur not.And this is not good for a creative person....:)
Anyways Beautiful lines...

mayz said...

y have i started seeing so much pain in ur recent posts??

Scribblers Inc said...

khushi ke aansu hai kya? xD

ok bad joke but very intelligent lines...

Scribblers Inc.

Aditi..............:) said...

hmmmm.....:)

joiedevivre said...

@ niki mam
hmm shayad i have grown up..
pics toh search karte karte mil jate hai... :D

joiedevivre said...

@ pranav
it says two things -
one is ofcourse khushi ke aasoon and other is the artificial smile ..

joiedevivre said...

@ sam
nope it has nothing to do with valentines day :P

joiedevivre said...

@ saim
poems are such beautiful things..
you can percieve them as per your imagination and understanding
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ hemzz
jyada mat soch..
njoy the wedding

joiedevivre said...

@ aditi
m absolutly fine..
..some thoughts..dats it

joiedevivre said...

@ ceedy
it actually is a irony of life
u got it right
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ ani
thanks :D

joiedevivre said...

@ smriti
:)
:)
:)
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ mehreen
thanks dear
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ amrita
haan re mein theek hu..
haan ro rai hu not bcoz of khushi bcoz of xamzz..yeh xam itne jaldi jaldi kyu aa jate hai
:X

joiedevivre said...

@ roo ba roo
*its good to be burdened with smile
...sometimes

joiedevivre said...

@ randeep
thats alrite
:))

joiedevivre said...

@ vinay
thank you sooooo much
:D

joiedevivre said...

@ pinku
sahi kaha pinkude..
:D

joiedevivre said...

@ g-joe
hehe..great

joiedevivre said...

@ pj
hmm..
m missin you yaar

joiedevivre said...

@ archana
lo kar diya isssmmilleee yaar
:))))))))))))

joiedevivre said...

@ hobo
hmm..removal of fabrication

joiedevivre said...

@ resurgence
yeah the lines are dual in meaning..makes sense..right?

joiedevivre said...

@ digant
hmm you said right..
but it isnt about about me..some thoughts in the mind set.

joiedevivre said...

@ mayz
hmm..
i dont know, just writing my heart and mind

joiedevivre said...

@ scribblers
hehe. yeah it is a bad joke..nyways it still got some smile..

thank you!

joiedevivre said...

@ aditi
hehe you commented like you name
......:)

Amrita~Ams said...

ooolalalal...
xms k liye royi bacchi....tujse xpected nahi tha waise :|....xms toh avai hai re..chod. show ur teeths or jhakas smile kar :D :D

Rajesh said...

every short poem of urs is getting better n better with time...lovely...makes us think :) :)

P.S: Visit ma blog soon...u hav something unexpected waiting :)

Sarath said...

Why the tears??? Smile hamesha..

joiedevivre said...

@ amrita
hehe..not actully..sai mein nai roi yaar..just dailog maara..
chinta nai..chahe kuch bhi ho...xam ke 1 hr pehle hi kitab uthate hai hum..
:D
see my jhakas smile

joiedevivre said...

@ rajesh
thanksss
..unecpected..maine dekh liya hai..u met with shreya...
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ sarath
hmm
hota hai kabhi kabhi aisa bhi

anirudh said...

:(

Pooja said...

b'ful!!!

absolutly b'ful!!!

shooting star said...

smiling while crying within....i have had those times....
those times when my pain was so much that looking at another person's happiness was unbearable...i can so recognize the thoughts behind those lines!!!!

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

aap sad ho ji??? dont be sad just be dad or better be mad ( sorry for the lameness)

neha hans de hans de ,hans de tu zara , nahi to bas thoda thoda , thoda muskura :)

joiedevivre said...

@ anirud
aarey tu kahe sad ho gaya

joiedevivre said...

@ pooja
:)
:)))

joiedevivre said...

@ shooting star
hmm..i went through the same

joiedevivre said...

@ i'l try to be truthful
hehe
*better be mad*
i liked it
:D
hass diya maine

Priyanshu Uniyal said...

Tears of Happiness and Artificial Smile... Hmm.. Nice Concept..!! She cant laugh further so she has put this smiling page in front of her...!! Cool!! Nice!! I like it.. Hope my dumb mind understood this :) and if its saying something else pls do tell!! :) Have a nice day...!

Siddharth said...

well u know u are sounding the same as govinda of partner.....

u know itni khushi, itni khushi, itni khushi..... and then he cries...

i'll take it in this way. i don't know whether i got it or not....

par mere bhege main to yehi ja raha hai [:)]

yaar jyada philosophical mat ho bouncer ho jati hai....

keep smiling and keep rocking,
sid....

joiedevivre said...

@ sid
hehe
baap re
neha = govinda (thoughts)
kaise baat kar ra hai yaarrr
aur haan tune bilkil galat interpret kiya hai.. :(
koi nai
jann de

garima said...

hii

this is my first visit to ur blog, liked it..very thoughtful... and I loved the design and layout too much esp the diary with coffee mug :)
keep writing.. such lines reflect the reality of life :)

AS
http://hummingwords.blogspot.com/

joiedevivre said...

@ garima
thank u so much