Wednesday, February 11, 2009

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बाजारों की चलती गलिया
बिखरी बातें, खोजी अखिया
मनचाहे आकार को ढूंढे
रंग सलोने हाथ को तरसे
यह भी तो एक रूप है तेरा
बोले सपन अधूरे नैना
स्पर्श से जागे तनमय बतिया
खनके कानो में मीठी रैना...
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bazaro ki chalti galiya
bikhri batein, khoji akhiya
manchahe aakar ko dhoondhe
rang salone hath ko tarase
yeh bhi toh ek roop hai tera
bole sapan adhoore naina
sparsh se jage tanmay batiya
khanke kano mein meethi raina...

44 comments:

peter said...

:O :O :O
arey aram se mam ...kuch samjh nahi aa raha hai ..hindi bahut jayda kamjor hai meri ..isko translate kar do plzzzz

Abhishek Khanna said...

sab samajh mein aya.. bas is ipost ka title 0 kyu hai y enahi aaya :D

oo7 said...

kya baat hai

WarmSunshine said...

ur last post was in hindi too

me can't understand hindi... plz translate this for me :)

Trinaa said...

kya ji? ab ye translate karke likho na..

Rakesh said...

Khoyi (Khoji) akhiyan?
Manchahe aakaar (aakar) ko dhunde?

My mom was a Hindi teacher you see :P

Shashank said...

nice one once again...
and once again i wont comment on the positives as i am sure u have enuf fans to do that....
here is my critical analysis :
1. 2nd line - i think it shud be 'khojein' or 'khojti' rather than 'khoji'
2. 3rd line - aakar...or aakaar?
3. ending kuchh to be continued sa keh raha hai mujhe....:)

Amrita~Ams said...

oye tu kisse inspire hai??blog url de :P...now a days u sounding more lyk poet :)

Resurgence said...

Gal... if I'm right..... U captured a very beautiful feeling.... but does that exist even today? pehle ki filmon me dekhne me achchi lagti thi.... :)... Kewl work.... waise kavitayein mujhe kam hi samajh aati hain..... :)

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Sarath said...

aap hindi mai bhi kavita likhte hai... good one..

SMRITI said...

Hmmmm... Kahaan se inspiration mil raha hai chhori...ekdum high funda baat bol rahi hai... Mom ko achha laga...dekhkar pooch rahi hai ki kyun likha hai? o_o

Pranav Kumar V said...

I'd be lying if I said I understood the whole plot!! I lost it somewhere on the last two lines!! But I'm sure it falls into place with whatever idea you wrote it...

See you when I see you... :)

MultiMenon said...

Translation... :(

I can understand hindi but not this firebrand pure stuff..My hindi is much restricted.. :( :(

Escorting life to death,nice!!

Thanks a for wishin me happy b'day in hemz's blog.. :)

Nikhil

mayz said...

have u ever tried writin professionally??

Roo-Ba-Roo said...

वाह वाह !!! बहुत खूब...

"मन करे बत्याँ जब वो हो, दूर कहीं, सपनो से भरी अखियाँ

nice...

Hobo ........ ........ ........ said...

.

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

wow yaar so sweet , ekdum rajasthan ke village wale scenes yaad aa gaye :)

Hemanth Potluri said...

:) beautiful :)..

urs..hemu..

k.ø.c.h.ü said...

NOT FAIRRRRRRRR.....GRRRRRRRRRR ;)

comfortably numb said...

beautiful...profound...
gud 2 c tht u can write ur poems in Hindi too...hope 2 try tht someday myself!!!

ceedy said...

:) did you experience it tho?

joiedevivre said...

@ pinku
hehe abey translate nai hota mere se
bohot mehnat karwayega tu..huh
:P

joiedevivre said...

@ abhishek
aare bhai
bangles ki shape ka refernce hai title mein
kuch aur samajh nai aaya toh yeh daal diya

joiedevivre said...

@ vikarm
:D

joiedevivre said...

@ mehreenn
okie

joiedevivre said...

@ tinni
aare beta teko hindi nai aati kya

joiedevivre said...

@ rakesh
hehe haan ek jagah typo err tha
lekin khoji is khoji
usme koi galti nai hai

joiedevivre said...

@ shashank
corrected the err

joiedevivre said...

@ amrita
hehe
abey yeh mere andar ki awaz hai

joiedevivre said...

@ resurgence
hota haina yaar
yeh sab toh aaj bhi dekhne milta hai
nazaro ka khel hai

joiedevivre said...

@ sarath
bas koshish kar rahe hu
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ smriti
ohh sacchii
she liked it
:D
thanx
kabhi milo toh fir bata ti hu inspiration isi bahane shayad mil bhi logi tum

joiedevivre said...

@ pranav
hmm

joiedevivre said...

@ multimenon
mention not
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ mayz
nah
abhi just started with hindi

joiedevivre said...

@ roo ba roo
bohot bohot dhanyawaad
:D

joiedevivre said...

@ hobo
.
iska kya matlab hai space shttule

joiedevivre said...

@ i'l try to be truthful
thanx dear

joiedevivre said...

@ hemzz
:D
thanxx

joiedevivre said...

@ kochu
hehe
oopss
sorry yaar its very difficult for me to translate

joiedevivre said...

@ saim
and i would love to read your poem in hindi

joiedevivre said...

@ ceedy
yes ofcourse

chirag said...

good lines
u wrote very well
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