Sunday, August 17, 2008

:) (:

" somethings are left undone
holding uncoloured feelings
drawing out no clear traces
still happy within indistinct paradise
don't feel like emancipating myself"

51 comments:

Anonymous said...

And Some Things Are Best Left Unsaid ...

Ever experienced A Feeling Of No Feeling? Much similar to those "Uncolored Feelings"

Love these little verses of yours! :)

And Thanks for a warm welcome! :D

Anonymous said...

You now follow a wonderful trend joiy, 4 liners, but amazing 4 liners and emotions conveyed in superb manner :)

dont have words rt now to put them here, but wud be back to put them over this another 4 wonderful lines.....

my post waitin ur comment too :)

Sameera Ansari said...

Lovely cinquain!

The title is very innovative :)

Keshi said...

sometimes we show our true colors in the things UNDONE.


*HUGZ*

Keshi.

Solitaire said...

So you are sad and happy at the same time?

Think Tank said...

yup we luv our paradise

Saim said...

undone....uncolored...unsaid....thrs sumthng abt incompleteness which is besotting

Unknown said...

hmmm.... nice

don't feel like emancipating myself

is that by choice? Or is it otherwise

joie de vivre said...

@ deranged insanity

yeah have experienced dat feelin of no feeling.
but here wat i meant was
a feeling wich is very much unknown.weird..hard to understand.

and you r always welcun bacchi

joie de vivre said...

@ buzz

yeah m njoyin writing dis way
xploring emotions!!

will comment on ur blog..

joie de vivre said...

@ samy

thanx

joie de vivre said...

@ keshi

thanx...

*HUGz
to u

joie de vivre said...

@ sol

no no m not at all sad.
m hapy wid dese unknown feelings

joie de vivre said...

@ think tank

we means..u too feel d same??

joie de vivre said...

@ iceman

dats by choice.

joie de vivre said...

@ numb
no dats not abt incumpletness
dats confusion..unable to understand..to react..
dats way left undone.

Roo-Ba-Roo said...

trying to find out the depth but....hmmm....bt as us said smtngs r best to hntold..unknown..

Parul Gupta said...

very deep thoughts conveyed in simple yet beautiful lines....

cheers
parul

joie de vivre said...

@ roo-ba-roo
hmm its best, not to reveal
untill we r sure wat it is

joie de vivre said...

@ parul

thanx...CHEERS!!

Aneesh said...

Somethings are left undone??
Don't worry, you can do it later :)

Again back to yourself, eh? after the scientific post :)

joie de vivre said...

@ aneesh
aare dis is sumthing serious..dnt make fun of it..

and yeah dats not necessarily abt me..it can b abt anyone of us...

u also might hav faced sumthing lik it..mayb

Trinaa said...

happy n sad at the same time? sounds completely like me!!

peter said...

uncolored feelings ....how thts gonna be ??
ummmm ..vague thoughts coming in mah mind ...but there is no end for this kind of crux ...!
endless ..!
gud one
I love small posts ..i srsly love them !

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Hemanth Potluri said...

u sad happy and both wow...cool one..and title rocks...


urs..hemu..

joie de vivre said...

@ trinaa

u too??
hmm

:)

joie de vivre said...

@ peter
uncoloured feeling...refers to confusion.

thanx

joie de vivre said...

@ hemanth

nai re m not sad..its confusion..
n m hapy to liv wid it

thanx yaar

joie de vivre said...

@ nithin

**i set my laws...!
dats wat i lik

k.ø.c.h.ü said...

No longer could i live there...there, where i lived a life that held me tight-lipped...there,where i remained lifeless shackled by laws...laws that forbade me from pouring out my heart...
So i created a world...my own world...where i ruled supreme...my laws...my limits... Unquestioned...beyond reproach...I now live in that world... And that world in me !

digant sutar said...

i liked concept of `uncolored feeling`
i was thinking if i want to portrait these feeling and i cant use colors then what can i do? but then i realized i can paint it in Gray.
cos i see some Gray shades of life in this poem...

joie de vivre said...

@ digant
yeah!!
draw sumthing..m waitin to see dat
:))

Quest said...

Things left undone hurts me more :-|

Anonymous said...

I agree with your thoughts...lovely lines!

joie de vivre said...

@ viajero
things left undone will sumday get done...m not losing d hope..

joie de vivre said...

@ flyingstar

thanx
:)

Priya Joyce said...

yes dear bilkul sahi
some things are relly best undone and unsaid.

u touched me dr

gud lined buddy

joie de vivre said...

@ pj
hey dear m so hapy to see u..i mean ur pic
now dnt change it

thanx :)
keep readin..ders a lot more lined up

my inner world said...

wow!!!

ya sometimes things unsaid and undone are good, probably once if they are over , we shall miss them somehow:)

joie de vivre said...

@ my inner world

yeah mayb!!

Urv said...

Aah lovely.. Btw the new template haan? Looks nice.. :)

joie de vivre said...

@ urv
thanx..

Anonymous said...

beautiful...

Saim said...

sumtimes a complete picture is an eyesore...thr in lies d beauty of incompleteness

joie de vivre said...

@ utp

:)

joie de vivre said...

@ numb
incomplet...
hope it will get cumplet sumday..resolved completly
:)

Prakhar said...

correct hai ek dum...nd life goes on :)

joie de vivre said...

@ prakhar
hmm life goes on??
nai re..its gud to liv in dis state for sumtime but not for ever

Anonymous said...

yeah...dos unkwn feelings r sorta too mesmerisin for us 2 free ourselves frm it...its luvly! but never 4 too long..

joie de vivre said...

@ enchanted illusionz
yeah its gud to hav dat feeling but not for ever..
seriously
life is beautifull wen u liv it practically