uncolored feelings ....how thts gonna be ?? ummmm ..vague thoughts coming in mah mind ...but there is no end for this kind of crux ...! endless ..! gud one I love small posts ..i srsly love them !
No longer could i live there...there, where i lived a life that held me tight-lipped...there,where i remained lifeless shackled by laws...laws that forbade me from pouring out my heart... So i created a world...my own world...where i ruled supreme...my laws...my limits... Unquestioned...beyond reproach...I now live in that world... And that world in me !
i liked concept of `uncolored feeling` i was thinking if i want to portrait these feeling and i cant use colors then what can i do? but then i realized i can paint it in Gray. cos i see some Gray shades of life in this poem...
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And Some Things Are Best Left Unsaid ...
Ever experienced A Feeling Of No Feeling? Much similar to those "Uncolored Feelings"
Love these little verses of yours! :)
And Thanks for a warm welcome! :D
You now follow a wonderful trend joiy, 4 liners, but amazing 4 liners and emotions conveyed in superb manner :)
dont have words rt now to put them here, but wud be back to put them over this another 4 wonderful lines.....
my post waitin ur comment too :)
Lovely cinquain!
The title is very innovative :)
sometimes we show our true colors in the things UNDONE.
*HUGZ*
Keshi.
So you are sad and happy at the same time?
yup we luv our paradise
undone....uncolored...unsaid....thrs sumthng abt incompleteness which is besotting
hmmm.... nice
don't feel like emancipating myself
is that by choice? Or is it otherwise
@ deranged insanity
yeah have experienced dat feelin of no feeling.
but here wat i meant was
a feeling wich is very much unknown.weird..hard to understand.
and you r always welcun bacchi
@ buzz
yeah m njoyin writing dis way
xploring emotions!!
will comment on ur blog..
@ samy
thanx
@ keshi
thanx...
*HUGz
to u
@ sol
no no m not at all sad.
m hapy wid dese unknown feelings
@ think tank
we means..u too feel d same??
@ iceman
dats by choice.
@ numb
no dats not abt incumpletness
dats confusion..unable to understand..to react..
dats way left undone.
trying to find out the depth but....hmmm....bt as us said smtngs r best to hntold..unknown..
very deep thoughts conveyed in simple yet beautiful lines....
cheers
parul
@ roo-ba-roo
hmm its best, not to reveal
untill we r sure wat it is
@ parul
thanx...CHEERS!!
Somethings are left undone??
Don't worry, you can do it later :)
Again back to yourself, eh? after the scientific post :)
@ aneesh
aare dis is sumthing serious..dnt make fun of it..
and yeah dats not necessarily abt me..it can b abt anyone of us...
u also might hav faced sumthing lik it..mayb
happy n sad at the same time? sounds completely like me!!
uncolored feelings ....how thts gonna be ??
ummmm ..vague thoughts coming in mah mind ...but there is no end for this kind of crux ...!
endless ..!
gud one
I love small posts ..i srsly love them !
u sad happy and both wow...cool one..and title rocks...
urs..hemu..
@ trinaa
u too??
hmm
:)
@ peter
uncoloured feeling...refers to confusion.
thanx
@ hemanth
nai re m not sad..its confusion..
n m hapy to liv wid it
thanx yaar
@ nithin
**i set my laws...!
dats wat i lik
No longer could i live there...there, where i lived a life that held me tight-lipped...there,where i remained lifeless shackled by laws...laws that forbade me from pouring out my heart...
So i created a world...my own world...where i ruled supreme...my laws...my limits... Unquestioned...beyond reproach...I now live in that world... And that world in me !
i liked concept of `uncolored feeling`
i was thinking if i want to portrait these feeling and i cant use colors then what can i do? but then i realized i can paint it in Gray.
cos i see some Gray shades of life in this poem...
@ digant
yeah!!
draw sumthing..m waitin to see dat
:))
Things left undone hurts me more :-|
I agree with your thoughts...lovely lines!
@ viajero
things left undone will sumday get done...m not losing d hope..
@ flyingstar
thanx
:)
yes dear bilkul sahi
some things are relly best undone and unsaid.
u touched me dr
gud lined buddy
@ pj
hey dear m so hapy to see u..i mean ur pic
now dnt change it
thanx :)
keep readin..ders a lot more lined up
wow!!!
ya sometimes things unsaid and undone are good, probably once if they are over , we shall miss them somehow:)
@ my inner world
yeah mayb!!
Aah lovely.. Btw the new template haan? Looks nice.. :)
@ urv
thanx..
beautiful...
sumtimes a complete picture is an eyesore...thr in lies d beauty of incompleteness
@ utp
:)
@ numb
incomplet...
hope it will get cumplet sumday..resolved completly
:)
correct hai ek dum...nd life goes on :)
@ prakhar
hmm life goes on??
nai re..its gud to liv in dis state for sumtime but not for ever
yeah...dos unkwn feelings r sorta too mesmerisin for us 2 free ourselves frm it...its luvly! but never 4 too long..
@ enchanted illusionz
yeah its gud to hav dat feeling but not for ever..
seriously
life is beautifull wen u liv it practically
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