And Some Things Are Best Left Unsaid ...Ever experienced A Feeling Of No Feeling? Much similar to those "Uncolored Feelings"Love these little verses of yours! :)And Thanks for a warm welcome! :D
You now follow a wonderful trend joiy, 4 liners, but amazing 4 liners and emotions conveyed in superb manner :)dont have words rt now to put them here, but wud be back to put them over this another 4 wonderful lines.....my post waitin ur comment too :)
Lovely cinquain!The title is very innovative :)
sometimes we show our true colors in the things UNDONE.*HUGZ*Keshi.
So you are sad and happy at the same time?
yup we luv our paradise
undone....uncolored...unsaid....thrs sumthng abt incompleteness which is besotting
hmmm.... nicedon't feel like emancipating myselfis that by choice? Or is it otherwise
@ deranged insanityyeah have experienced dat feelin of no feeling.but here wat i meant wasa feeling wich is very much unknown.weird..hard to understand.and you r always welcun bacchi
@ buzzyeah m njoyin writing dis wayxploring emotions!!will comment on ur blog..
@ keshithanx...*HUGzto u
@ solno no m not at all sad.m hapy wid dese unknown feelings
@ think tankwe means..u too feel d same??
@ icemandats by choice.
@ numbno dats not abt incumpletnessdats confusion..unable to understand..to react..dats way left undone.
trying to find out the depth but....hmmm....bt as us said smtngs r best to hntold..unknown..
very deep thoughts conveyed in simple yet beautiful lines....cheersparul
@ roo-ba-roohmm its best, not to reveal untill we r sure wat it is
Somethings are left undone??Don't worry, you can do it later :)Again back to yourself, eh? after the scientific post :)
@ aneeshaare dis is sumthing serious..dnt make fun of it..and yeah dats not necessarily abt me..it can b abt anyone of us...u also might hav faced sumthing lik it..mayb
happy n sad at the same time? sounds completely like me!!
uncolored feelings ....how thts gonna be ??ummmm ..vague thoughts coming in mah mind ...but there is no end for this kind of crux ...!endless ..!gud oneI love small posts ..i srsly love them !
u sad happy and both wow...cool one..and title rocks...urs..hemu..
@ trinaau too??hmm:)
@ peteruncoloured feeling...refers to confusion.thanx
@ hemanthnai re m not sad..its confusion..n m hapy to liv wid itthanx yaar
@ nithin**i set my laws...!dats wat i lik
No longer could i live there...there, where i lived a life that held me tight-lipped...there,where i remained lifeless shackled by laws...laws that forbade me from pouring out my heart...So i created a world...my own world...where i ruled supreme...my laws...my limits... Unquestioned...beyond reproach...I now live in that world... And that world in me !
i liked concept of `uncolored feeling`i was thinking if i want to portrait these feeling and i cant use colors then what can i do? but then i realized i can paint it in Gray. cos i see some Gray shades of life in this poem...
@ digantyeah!!draw sumthing..m waitin to see dat:))
Things left undone hurts me more :-|
I agree with your thoughts...lovely lines!
@ viajerothings left undone will sumday get done...m not losing d hope..
yes dear bilkul sahisome things are relly best undone and unsaid.u touched me drgud lined buddy
@ pjhey dear m so hapy to see u..i mean ur picnow dnt change itthanx :)keep readin..ders a lot more lined up
wow!!!ya sometimes things unsaid and undone are good, probably once if they are over , we shall miss them somehow:)
@ my inner worldyeah mayb!!
Aah lovely.. Btw the new template haan? Looks nice.. :)
sumtimes a complete picture is an eyesore...thr in lies d beauty of incompleteness
@ numbincomplet...hope it will get cumplet sumday..resolved completly:)
correct hai ek dum...nd life goes on :)
@ prakharhmm life goes on??nai re..its gud to liv in dis state for sumtime but not for ever
yeah...dos unkwn feelings r sorta too mesmerisin for us 2 free ourselves frm it...its luvly! but never 4 too long..
@ enchanted illusionzyeah its gud to hav dat feeling but not for ever..seriously life is beautifull wen u liv it practically
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