Sunday, August 17, 2008

:) (:

" somethings are left undone
holding uncoloured feelings
drawing out no clear traces
still happy within indistinct paradise
don't feel like emancipating myself"

51 comments:

∂єяαngє∂ ιnѕαnιту ^.^ said...

And Some Things Are Best Left Unsaid ...

Ever experienced A Feeling Of No Feeling? Much similar to those "Uncolored Feelings"

Love these little verses of yours! :)

And Thanks for a warm welcome! :D

Buzzz said...

You now follow a wonderful trend joiy, 4 liners, but amazing 4 liners and emotions conveyed in superb manner :)

dont have words rt now to put them here, but wud be back to put them over this another 4 wonderful lines.....

my post waitin ur comment too :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Lovely cinquain!

The title is very innovative :)

Keshi said...

sometimes we show our true colors in the things UNDONE.


*HUGZ*

Keshi.

Solitaire said...

So you are sad and happy at the same time?

Think Tank said...

yup we luv our paradise

comfortably numb said...

undone....uncolored...unsaid....thrs sumthng abt incompleteness which is besotting

Iceman said...

hmmm.... nice

don't feel like emancipating myself

is that by choice? Or is it otherwise

joiedevivre said...

@ deranged insanity

yeah have experienced dat feelin of no feeling.
but here wat i meant was
a feeling wich is very much unknown.weird..hard to understand.

and you r always welcun bacchi

joiedevivre said...

@ buzz

yeah m njoyin writing dis way
xploring emotions!!

will comment on ur blog..

joiedevivre said...

@ samy

thanx

joiedevivre said...

@ keshi

thanx...

*HUGz
to u

joiedevivre said...

@ sol

no no m not at all sad.
m hapy wid dese unknown feelings

joiedevivre said...

@ think tank

we means..u too feel d same??

joiedevivre said...

@ iceman

dats by choice.

joiedevivre said...

@ numb
no dats not abt incumpletness
dats confusion..unable to understand..to react..
dats way left undone.

Roo-Ba-Roo said...

trying to find out the depth but....hmmm....bt as us said smtngs r best to hntold..unknown..

Parul Gupta said...

very deep thoughts conveyed in simple yet beautiful lines....

cheers
parul

joiedevivre said...

@ roo-ba-roo
hmm its best, not to reveal
untill we r sure wat it is

joiedevivre said...

@ parul

thanx...CHEERS!!

Aneesh said...

Somethings are left undone??
Don't worry, you can do it later :)

Again back to yourself, eh? after the scientific post :)

joiedevivre said...

@ aneesh
aare dis is sumthing serious..dnt make fun of it..

and yeah dats not necessarily abt me..it can b abt anyone of us...

u also might hav faced sumthing lik it..mayb

Trinaa said...

happy n sad at the same time? sounds completely like me!!

peter said...

uncolored feelings ....how thts gonna be ??
ummmm ..vague thoughts coming in mah mind ...but there is no end for this kind of crux ...!
endless ..!
gud one
I love small posts ..i srsly love them !

Nithin Jayan said...
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Hemanth Potluri said...

u sad happy and both wow...cool one..and title rocks...


urs..hemu..

joiedevivre said...

@ trinaa

u too??
hmm

:)

joiedevivre said...

@ peter
uncoloured feeling...refers to confusion.

thanx

joiedevivre said...

@ hemanth

nai re m not sad..its confusion..
n m hapy to liv wid it

thanx yaar

joiedevivre said...

@ nithin

**i set my laws...!
dats wat i lik

Nithin Jayan said...

No longer could i live there...there, where i lived a life that held me tight-lipped...there,where i remained lifeless shackled by laws...laws that forbade me from pouring out my heart...
So i created a world...my own world...where i ruled supreme...my laws...my limits... Unquestioned...beyond reproach...I now live in that world... And that world in me !

digant sutar said...

i liked concept of `uncolored feeling`
i was thinking if i want to portrait these feeling and i cant use colors then what can i do? but then i realized i can paint it in Gray.
cos i see some Gray shades of life in this poem...

joiedevivre said...

@ digant
yeah!!
draw sumthing..m waitin to see dat
:))

Viajero said...

Things left undone hurts me more :-|

flyingstars said...

I agree with your thoughts...lovely lines!

joiedevivre said...

@ viajero
things left undone will sumday get done...m not losing d hope..

joiedevivre said...

@ flyingstar

thanx
:)

Priya Joyce said...

yes dear bilkul sahi
some things are relly best undone and unsaid.

u touched me dr

gud lined buddy

joiedevivre said...

@ pj
hey dear m so hapy to see u..i mean ur pic
now dnt change it

thanx :)
keep readin..ders a lot more lined up

my inner world said...

wow!!!

ya sometimes things unsaid and undone are good, probably once if they are over , we shall miss them somehow:)

joiedevivre said...

@ my inner world

yeah mayb!!

Urv said...

Aah lovely.. Btw the new template haan? Looks nice.. :)

joiedevivre said...

@ urv
thanx..

UTP said...

beautiful...

comfortably numb said...

sumtimes a complete picture is an eyesore...thr in lies d beauty of incompleteness

joiedevivre said...

@ utp

:)

joiedevivre said...

@ numb
incomplet...
hope it will get cumplet sumday..resolved completly
:)

Prakhar said...

correct hai ek dum...nd life goes on :)

joiedevivre said...

@ prakhar
hmm life goes on??
nai re..its gud to liv in dis state for sumtime but not for ever

enchanted illusionz said...

yeah...dos unkwn feelings r sorta too mesmerisin for us 2 free ourselves frm it...its luvly! but never 4 too long..

joiedevivre said...

@ enchanted illusionz
yeah its gud to hav dat feeling but not for ever..
seriously
life is beautifull wen u liv it practically