Saturday, July 12, 2008

One More Impulse

Half filled eyes
staring neon hoarding
glowing steady flames
generating mild madness
twisting forces in and out
mellowed minute moments
looking around to be wise
getting the measure
to look after incisive jiggle
crippling the regards
unable to find to him!

46 comments:

Hemanth Potluri said...

Love ....u can find the person in a room of darkness wer even it is filled with total darkness..if the love towards the person is true ..u can hear the heart beat and aprroach him....

Good Post...

PS: do i look like uncle wahhh :'( i am crying now hahaha lol...

joie de vivre said...

@ hemanth
no yarr it dosent mean dat
it actully defines the moment when the girl is waitin for her lover..

Hemanth Potluri said...

i understood that but wanted to give a diffrent discription of love...the diffrent view of love...

ur english accent is soo cool i have to go to dictionay.com to find the meaning for some words...

lol...but the post is too cool..may be one day if i had lover she wud be waiting for me too..

urs..hemu..

Arun said...

hmmm... waiting for someone can seem like an eternity.. nice lines :) heyy.. u look like this collegue of mine.. "Ann"... if thats u!

Priya Joyce said...

hey buddy I don't have such an experience. wen I have 1 then I'll be commenting on it after graduating in "Intezaar".

Aneesh said...

oooh!!!
Yet another indigestible one :)

joie de vivre said...

@ hemanth
hogi uncleji koi toh ladki hogi..dnt wry
haha
abt diificult words...i want to reach the emotion proplerly
and dese r d xact wrds...
very percise!

joie de vivre said...

@ arun pk
nop m not ann..
m joie
anyways thanx

joie de vivre said...

@ priya
beta m also not xperienced...i was just tryin to xplore dat feelin..i dnt kno hw much m correct

"we need sum xperienced people here"

:)

joie de vivre said...

@ aneesh
haha..sory yaar
dats d way i write...i cant help it

thoda try toh kar samajh aa jayega...haha

Priya Joyce said...

oooh well explored. maan gaye.

Anonymous said...

I came across these beautiful words by Herbert Shipman in my friend's blog's comment section:

"Across the gateway of my heart
I wrote 'No thorough-fare'
But LOVE came laughing by and cried,
'I enter everywhere!'"


Love! You can't keep yourself away from it :)
I wonder why do I keep hiting it (The topic, not love :P) again and again!

joie de vivre said...

@ priya
thank u pj...will keep xplorin more n more

joie de vivre said...

@ deranged insanity
very nice lines!!
liked it a lot.

Priya Joyce said...

yaar collg mein aane ke baad saare bade romantic ho jaate hain. wat say

humbl devil said...

waiting for the right moment make the kill???
:D

Lucifer said...

**unable to find to him!

did u look in ur heart??

joie de vivre said...

@ priya
hmm haan shayad..

joie de vivre said...

@ devil
no yaarr..
nothin lik rite moment..

joie de vivre said...

@ mayz
it has nothin to do wid my life
dey r jst few lines..to xplore d moments while waitin

Keshi said...

It seems Im waiting forever! :)

Keshi.

prajyot said...

@ jojedevivre

frankly speaking it took me 5 mins to understand what u actually meant...
True love is really hard to find,but once found,its really HAPPINESS...!!

well atcually in real world na..there are very few people who actually care for love..!!

But finding true love is real treat of happiness..!!

Hemanth Potluri said...

holy s*** ur again callin me that i surely will die with that feelin yaar...

urs..hemu..

amol dethe said...

the emotions are the same everywhere but expressions are wonderful....

joie de vivre said...

@ keshi
ders sum kind of pleasure in waitin!!
:)

joie de vivre said...

@ prajyot
hmm..agreed..
really hard to find!!

aur 5 min mein samajh aa gai.. gud..but likhne mein bohot time laga mujhe...haha

joie de vivre said...

@ hemanth
haha..sory yaar
m kiddin..

joie de vivre said...

@ amol
thanx
:)

Aneesh said...

LOL, Yah I will

Priya Joyce said...

have u seen ma latest post on experiences its fun.

Sach1 said...

b'ful!
I believe this is what love is about. Even that wait has some essence to it...

joie de vivre said...

@ sach
yeah!
:)

Sameera Ansari said...

Such moments are painful and make one so listless.But the joyful reunion is worth the wait! :)

joie de vivre said...

@ samy
true!! can never ever evaluvate dat joy..

Unknown said...

Nice one...

here's a slightly similar version that long long back I had written, not the same words.. but its fits in well so used some of urs...


Blood filled eyes
searching frantically
a heart consumed by flames
a maddening rage
losing senses in and out
sinking moments after moments
looking around for the end
surrendered to the carnage
to look for a sweet release
crippled and burnt
unable to find me!

joie de vivre said...

@ iceman
another beautiful form...
"defined wait" i guess
:)

Cяystal said...

Just one word-


Spelendindly splendid (oops.two words )

joie de vivre said...

@ aayushi
thanx
:)

A J...ツ said...

Ahem! Ahem!!

Unofficially official first comment on your blog, my dear...

Silently, yet beautifully captured emotions... Beauty of those moments at its best!

Keep writing :))

Comfortably Numb said...

Short and Crisp. It makes a lot of sense too. I like!

Cheers!!

joie de vivre said...

@ aj
no formalities yaar!!
nice to see ur comment..thank u !
:)

joie de vivre said...

@ comfortably numb
thanx...n CHEERS!!

Anonymous said...

thoughtful :)

BTW do you hail from the heart of the country ?

Benaam Badnaam said...

aah yes...in the middle of a bustling market on a sunday evening...is when u can stand in the middle of the road and observe each person who goes by very closely without the fear of neone ever noticing u...maybe somewhere in the maddening crowd is a face we have been looking for...

joie de vivre said...

@ buzzz
yeah i do..

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