Friday, July 4, 2008

Signal

This morning i woke up
with a signal
signal to remain indoor
people were crying out
for cubby holes
and i got my place on cue
hooligans trying to cut up
carving culpable cult
spreading cyst in environment
crippling at bay
involving in a crime
keeping in my mind
willing to face up to
that signal reached my mind.

27 comments:

mayz said...

frnakly dat went way above my iq level...but nice template!!!

joiedevivre said...

@ mayz
no prob wid dat..i'l hepl u wid it
it was about d curfew at my place n things wich i xperinced..
signal is d wrd to say curfew...

thanx :)

"Dosth" said...

"Morality is of the highest importance - but for us, not for God." -Albert Einstein.

probably the saddest thing to happen is when people start to fight in the name of religion.
thats when all the weaknesses come out.thats when bystanders realize how flawed faith is.

thats when people realize that religion is not religion anymore...it is a tool...
and quiet a dangerous tool...it suddenly becomes a glue that sticks people together...into two groups most of the time...
and groups of mostly very unobvious hetrogenous components...

today..there is a very fine, almost invisible, line between religion and politics...both have started to become the edges of a sword
religion has become the biggest dictator. the dictator of terms in a dog eat dog world.

i am no atheist...and not a communist...but i like to believe that i kno the right frm the wrong...

and i hope we all do too.....

P.S. its a great way to write abt this topic. i undrstud it as soon as i read the second line...hope the wrold becomes a better place for us to live in.

Pranay said...

Nice lines....Thought u r gonna have a word starting with c in every line but wasn't to be....A different sort of alliteration...;).
Very well put.

joiedevivre said...

@ pranay
thanx..but my poems never rhym
wateve but it makes sense n conveyed the crux i think

joiedevivre said...

@ dost
u got d essence of those lines here
i too believe...
peole dnt understand...no one is goin to get any benefit or happiness out of it..
"kaun samjhaye inhe"
yeh koi bhasha nai samajhte...
2day its again d same situation here..wahi issues..
"hindu muslim"..
its such a shame for us..we cant maintain peace and order in our country..
really feel bad abt it!

Hemanth Potluri said...

wow ..nice explanation abt the curfew and the bad guys tryin to take over the place...i had to search dictionary for few words..ur writing level is 9.5 out of 10 ..mines just 5...but ur description was too cool...


urs.hemu..

shobhna said...

U r a poetess very nice lines. Buddy its very gud again I say u r a big philosopher.

joiedevivre said...

@ hemanth
yeah d situation is not good,life has distrubed.
i really not intended to use hard words..i wanted to make it very straight n to d point.
n hw can u rate d writing level..mine is 9.5..my my
i dnt think m just learnin..
thanx:)

joiedevivre said...

@ shobna
thanx dear:)
u really encourage...!

d SINNER!!! said...

i thot it was a lil too complicated...

i can relate those lines to a vegetable moment or life...

joiedevivre said...

@ d sinner
luk wat i said to hemanth
thanx for stoppin by
:)

Deranged Insanity said...

This morning even I woke up with a signal and it reminded me of You! :)


Therefore, I am here, right now :)

God Bless and thanks for these beautiful words!

Aneesh said...

I needed a dictionary :)

Nice one though :)

Aneesh said...

@dosth

does it deal with the post?

Friendly nextdoor guy said...

waow
people are usually stressed-out, you got stressed-in!!

prajyot said...

lovely post..and amazing blog...

joiedevivre said...

@ deranged insanity
i dont want anymore signals now..

@ aneesh
ohh..i jst wanted straight words to xpress.
tx

joiedevivre said...

@ friendly nextdoor guy
hey ur name is too long..
well m not stressed,m unhappy about things goin at my place
i want a nrml life..no signals..no curfew

joiedevivre said...

@ prajyot
thanx
:)

mirror image said...

None of you would agree with me but it is true a bitter truth which nobody would like to accept. Every single person has a 'god' as well as 'devil' in it. "-sadhu aur shaitaan!!" The rioters are not people from other worlds. They are like us only. Whether it is hindu muslim, over north south, or upper-lower cast, or hindu-non-hindu, marathi-non-marathi. Even if win over these differences there comes rich and poor, urban and rural, literate and illeterate, social status in some cases which ideology you follow, communism or congress, the villages are divided over ideology in w. bengal. You dont have to look very far away. You will find in your locality. A family struggling for its integrity. FAther-son, husband-wife. Even in schools and colleges you will find groups and gangs with different mindsets of people. At workplace everywhere. The thing which transforms a 'sadhu to a shaitaan' is the provocation. It might be not so easy for a person like me and you to get provoked to act in a henious manner but there is a line that says 'enough is enough'. I am not here to say riot is good or rioter is good but i mean to say it has happened since ages, it is happening and it will happen. we cannot change the world. You have to have thorns where there are flowers but what we can do is we can change ourselves to do creative and good for mankind.

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

I was wondering if it's about a curfew,your reply to Mayz confirmed it!

Nice expressions :)

Thanks for blogrolling me,you are blogrolled too!

Ashu said...

curfew ? my home town is under curfew too and it really sucks :(. fight on an irrelevant issue ;(

joiedevivre said...

@ mirror image
m learning d art of adjsuting wid thorns..
i partly agree to you..dese people are between us..dey are born as a human..
and n number of factors are responsible for conversion of sadhu to shaitaan...no wud luv to do such things..

joiedevivre said...

@ ashu
yeah its really bad...

Nirav Sinha said...

Short and sweet.. lesser said the better. I prefer not to hate the lovers or the haters of religion and the likes nor be oblivious but to pity all along.

joiedevivre said...

@ nirav
i tried to rite more in less words.
thanx