Thursday, July 10, 2008

life is like a black board i realised today
full of emotions,truths,lies,suffering and pain
m fully occupied now
& its time to make some change
to rub it off some part from it
and i decided
to remove all that which caused uncomfort.


prajyot said...

well life is certainly black board..but what i feel is the the creativity of HOW THE BOARD(LIFE) CAN BE DECORATED DEPENDS ON CHALK(HUMANS)

we always feel life is boaring,or waste,but if u see,all humans are bon with motto..!!

some people dont get the motto so they feel BLACKED OUT..!!

Remember the movie says only 1 word " ASSHAYEIN"....this word itself says everything...

something which we feel we need to achive

something which we need to gain

something which will fetch our "LAKSHA"

something which is more important than anything

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

It's hard to erase them but well worth a try!

Nice lines :)

joiedevivre said...

@ prayjot
yeah true!!
i'l b moving ahead...n sum part of the omitted will always b carried wid me...but i hav learned frm dat.
xperienced dat
m movin for dat motto..

joiedevivre said...

@ sameera
m not gona erase dem..coz dey hav taught me sumthin.
so dey'l b sumwhere in my memory.

Anonymous said...

Girl, tell me something...Why do you take "life" so seriously ?

Arun PK said...

Hi Joiedevivre..ur lines r amazing.. tells u to forget forgettable events and move on in life... very nice :-)

Priya Joyce said...

how nice it would have been if we could erase our difficulties like that.
But gud comparison niway.

Hemanth Potluri said...

"The purpose of man is in action not thought."

well wat ever thoughts that have been hurtin me on the backboard of life i wud be erasing them with the actions meant to forget them forever...

VGood post ..remembered previous lies and truths abt life..

Deranged Insanity ^.^ said...

Indeed, Life is a blackboard and we all sketch our own destinies on it.
The only difference is that on blackboard, we can erase the part we don't like ..Wish we cud do that with life too :)

Deranged Insanity ^.^

P.S Deranged Insanity should not be an escort any more :)
Will keep coming back for more!

joiedevivre said...

@ mishraji
m serious to live my life in best possible way i can!!!

joiedevivre said...

@ arun

joiedevivre said...

@ priya
kisko aachi lagti hai difficulties..but life widout dem is charmless!

joiedevivre said...

@ hemanth
nice thght hemanth

joiedevivre said...

@ deranged insanity
first of all really gud to see ur presence here..
i wanted to read more of u,but m really unfortunate.
i kno dat u r no more on doin bloggin..but u r still an ESCORT
so will keep u dere itself.
to remember sumone who called me 'di'

about post
life is such an unpredictable wevevr we try to erase or remove we r again filed up wid sumthing else..

Anonymous said...

You do not have to be serious at all for that.So much of analysis- Goshh... you will kill yourself with all so much of thought.Aaram se bhai...You know something, I heard Harsha bhogle talk ( of course I mean I watched a video of his talks )sometime back and he said," Every Indian is a born philosopher and everyone thinks that he is better than everyone else around".So very true and I think I too am in his list of such Indians.

I do a little bit of reading in Arts stream subjects, like sociology and psychology.I read somewhere that there is too much stress on Success (defined in worldly terms) in India and hardly any stress on the path to it.

If you can connect with what I told you, you would understand what I mean by not-taking-life-seriously. If not, ask me. I will explain it to you in detail.

joiedevivre said...

@ mishraji
sabse pehle m not bhai!
and thanx a lot for ur concern
wil surely talk to you in detail about dis

Iceman said...

thoda sweet thoda sour... very important to taste all flavor of life!

besides... no point in holdin on to something that hurts.. just let go ur self of it... free ur self from it! :D

Nice... deep post...

Solitaire said...

How? Tell me how.

mirror image said...

Practically speaking we cannot erase those bad times, it is literally impossible. But there is a way to totall get rid of them by practicing "Vipassyana"

Cinderella. said...

I agree with Sameera...but yeah, that shoudlnt deter you from trying...

Goddluck with cleaning up...!

The Soul: said...

hmm well..its we who decide the karma..true that not all experiences are good..but yes.someone very wise once said "guilt will kill you..always keep the pinch and drop the guilt"..thats what we refer to as move one :)
hell yeah..rub the ones that cause discomfort and move on!
good one..though i totally agree with mishra that u shudn't be taking life this seriously..let go and good things will happen!!

and hey..have blogrolled you!!
keep visitng

Aneesh said...

Well said, life is like a blcak board, but once a mistake is made, I don't think we can rub it off :)

joiedevivre said...

@ iceman
atlest u got wat i said
most of the people here dnt agree to me

joiedevivre said...

@ sol
i'l make myself free...
now i'l b just more wries abt others..
dis charity thing hav always troubled me.

joiedevivre said...

@ mirror image
ohh u r really so much into dese aasan and all
m not into such things also dey dnt intrest me
but thanx
and yes m gona remove not erase.
dis part has also given me sum taste of life..
but i dnt lik dis taste!

joiedevivre said...

@ cindrella
yup i m cleaning those uncomforts form my hard disk

joiedevivre said...

@ the soul
dnt think m not hapy wid life or i dnt njoy life...
to write serious or think serious dosent mean i dnt hav joy in my life.
i want to liv fullest!
and dis rubbin off will help me.
i kno dat!

joiedevivre said...

@ aneesh
mistakes can b corrected..and for dat i need time n space.

VvK said...

never take lyf too seriously coz no one comes out alive...:D

jokes apart...we wouldnt be what we are without our memories..

Deranged Insanity ^.^ said...

Thanks Di! For once again =))
I promise, I'll definitely be back with some more ranting :P
Until then Adios and Godbless :D

joiedevivre said...

@ vvk
dnt u think to live in more better way sumthings need to get removed..
so dat more n more life can b filled
thanx for droppin

joiedevivre said...

@ deranged insanity
hav smile..

Nithin Jayan said...

nice one...he he..seems its high time 2 get my thoughts a copyright ;-) u've stolen one!!! luvd dat mate...keep writin in!!!!

joiedevivre said...

@ nithin
ohh i really not intended to get into ur mind...hehe

mayz said...

life is like a reads wateva u write on it...

i really like d way u have put it...a new concept...n smthn dat has got me thinkin

joiedevivre said...

@ mayz

Nishchal Shukla નિશ્ચલ શુક્લ said... i have a different shouldnt erase the things that cause should learn from them and keep them so that they keep reminding u what you have learned from it. Ofcourse, its just my view...

joiedevivre said...

@ nishchal
luk at the comments i hav replied.
i hav said already
dat i hav learned frm evrythin..gud n bad.
so erasin dem dosent mean dat dey r of no importance

Nishchal Shukla નિશ્ચલ શુક્લ said...

do you really expect me to go through the 38 comments! :D

joiedevivre said...

@ nishchal
not 38..only those to whom i hav relpied

Nishchal Shukla નિશ્ચલ શુક્લ said...

which in a way means going through 38 comments na...think about it!

joiedevivre said...

@ nishchal
no it means u hav to go thru only replied comments.
and if u just want to stretch my words den u dnt hav to gothru comments

Anonymous said...

life is like a board which wud show u up what u want to write on it....happiness or sadness or all depends on u waht u want to write :)))

joiedevivre said...

@ ashu'z
xactly..dats y m makin sum more space for life!

amol dethe said...

HI..How lovingly you have described your perception. But, it’s not that I am against your perception. We see many dreams and expect it to happen and when it doesn’t happen we become infuriate. Seeing and expecting dream is not a bad game but just expecting it to happen is. Like you! Do you have many demands from life your poem reflects it.
Well, I don’t know why people put blame on life... because it’s not life, that disturbs you... It’s ‘time’ my dear. Many times we get stuck and loose our faith while dealing with time. But ‘time’ changes... the barren land of summer blossoms in monsoon and the birds return to their old nest, when spring arrives. It’s just time my is as simple as it is... we should learn to deal with time... Everybody behaves different in different situations/times. May be life is black board /darkness for you and be it’s white board for someone else... your black board reminded me a small a story...
Once a great leader was about to begin his lecture. He just thought to analyze the audience. So, He drew a small dot on the center of whiteboard with his black marker and questioned them. What can you see on the board? Every one said. BLACK DOT. The leader smiled and said yes that’s what I have drawn.... but has anybody seen the WHITE BOARD...? Its far far far far bigger than the dot.... And surprisingly no one said yes..!

joiedevivre said...

@ amol
very nice story..

first of all how can u perdict my life or my u kno me???
the biggest question

next is...wateve poetry's i hav written are just forms of emotion..not necessarily related to me...
sum ideas are taken frm surroundin, people around u, books, songs and for anything dat matters.

*blame on life..well if m blamin to life (though m not) may b m doin rite atleast for myself...why shud i liv wid any hurts n regtrets..and wat do u kno abt my life..

and i never said life is darkness for me...i think u shud go thru the post one more time and analyse it.

Pro-found-it said...

nice analogy...
n very well written.
while in the process of posting my comment i read smone's comment abt the 'White Board' (sorry 4got the name). i'd just like to add, that by making life a white board ur taking it for granted.. i'd prefer it as a black board and colour it with all kinds of chalk so much so that the BLACK is not visible.
now 'that' would be something one would look back and be proud of...
what say ?!?!

Kopal Khanna said...

that's true...:-)

joiedevivre said...

@ pro found it
wat to say yarr...very nice
u hav added dis thing to my black board,

joiedevivre said...

@ kopal
:) thku...welcum