Sunday, July 6, 2008

Shhhh!!

Share the silence
dump in the words of woe
coming together
abstaining from sound
running away unobserved
giving out nascent love
catching the eye
scooping each instant
presuming to get lost
shoulder to shoulder
walking in silence
keeping close to each other
drizzling over the mutant feelings
cutting down the distance
lowering the pace of imagination
when eyes got open
moments of trust
bring in the light
and
silence got vanished.

70 comments:

Cinderella. said...

YOu're into poetry ?! Wow !

Lovely piece there...

Deranged Insanity said...

I am wonderin the same :)

Someone has got so much hidden inside this beautiful soul ...But I guess not any more!

Is that your life-time collection that's coming out or your are carving these wonderful pieces now?

flyingstars said...

lovely words...you have crafted it beautifully which we can all feel it...wonderful writing!

Keshi said...

wow just beautiful!

Keshi.

shobhna said...

Gud post again ma poetess buddy as I call u it sounds romantic.

U have great depth in u. Keep it up buddy.

Iceman said...

nice...

ur words.... and silence...
one of the most beautiful things in this world... Silence...

joiedevivre said...

@ cindrella
i discovered d art of poetry inside me sumtime back..
m new to it
thnx...WC
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ deranged insanity
no need to guess dear..dere'l b a lot more to xpress n write..
i came up wid dis silence yesterday..i was waitin for sumone..n i wrote dis..
if u want to read more poetry..
check out my previous post's
tc

joiedevivre said...

@ flyingstars
i m glad if u can really feel those words..
welcum to escorts

joiedevivre said...

@ keshi
hey u asked me abt silence
dere u hav one more reason of silence..
i liked silence!!
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ shobhna
dere will b more romantic things ahead dear..u'l hav more deapth..untouched.!!!
thnx dear

joiedevivre said...

@ iceman
ture one of d most beautiful..
thnx

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Beautiful!You have weaved the words so well.

joiedevivre said...

@ sameera
:)

Keshi said...

Joi plz come n read my reply to ur comment. I think u misunderstood that post.

Keshi.

Hemanth Potluri said...

Silence has the loudest voice ....

u rock neha ..gud one tho....


urs..hemu..

Nithin Jayan said...

yupp..sorry....im a late comer...just landed on yer blog 2day..wow this post is really nice...luvd de style...

Nithin Jayan said...

by de way u sure u need this image verification...?isn't it a bit nagging?

Aneesh said...

You said a lot with your silence :)

prajyot said...

well really nice poem..all truth words..

Well i felt as if ur a person who has lots of things within ur heart,just needs a medium to explore and explose things from ur heart...

prajyot said...

well have added u onto my blog...!!

joiedevivre said...

@ hemanth
kya baat hai
"Silence has the loudest voice"
nice

joiedevivre said...

@ nithin
i think pic is justifying silence more den words..
also i used it to create sum feel in readin.
thanx..wel cum
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ aneesh
thanx frnd!

joiedevivre said...

@ prajot
no need for guessin..dere'l b a lot more..
than for addin
:)

Nithin Jayan said...

oh! dat wasn't wat i meant...de 'image' verification required here(in this page) to paste a comment!!!

de pictures in de posts are awesome..
yup u got me wrong ngeeeee...
;-)

Nithin Jayan said...

n thanks a lot 4 de visit n comment..will b disturbing u often!!! wid my invitations 2 ma blog...!!!;-)

joiedevivre said...

@ nithin
ohh..i got dat now...

i wud feel gud to get disturbed..n visitn at ur space too

Nishchal Shukla નિશ્ચલ શુક્લ said...

was that a dream? (sorry, but i am too poor at poems...) btw, saw my name in the 'Escorts' list...whats that? (a blog roll?) And how did u get to visit my blog...thru someone?

mayz said...

**Share the silence...unobserved

a call??..a cry??..a yell?? words lookin for answers...echo...silence talks back

**drizzling over the mutant feeling

tears...poison...ambrosia???
a drop at a time...mingling wid emotions...tingling sensations...good...bad...unknown

**open moments...vanished

candle in d darkness...a silver lining...light at d end of d tunnel!!!

i dnt kno whether u meant it to be interpreted this way...but i totally loved d usage of words...brilliant piece!!!

joiedevivre said...

@ nishchal
dat was not a dream..it is a piece of time..describin silence
yeah hav blogrolled u..
i was just surfin over profles n dats how i came to Thoughts ih Solitude

my inner world said...

"dump in the words of woe"

absolutely, loved this line and the whole poem too:)

joiedevivre said...

@ mayz
first of all...m really hapy..u really gave a try u understand dat
m very hapy.
well it means sumthin else
i'l elaborate it later
thanx a lot frnd
:)

mayz said...

blogrollin ya

joiedevivre said...

@ my inner world
thanx dear

humbl devil said...

aaah...the wonders of nascent love...
this a blast from the past or is this the present...
hope it's the latter!!!
:)

Mishra said...

Goshh..Poetry is the only thing I can not understand.I am scared of poems.Care to explain it a little ?

Ashu said...

you have been a messemerizing poet sweetie. this is a class act!!

joiedevivre said...

@ devil
dis has nothing to do wid my life..
no present...no latter..fine
its an emotion..wich i tried to penn down.

joiedevivre said...

@ mishraji
ohh dats no issue..no prob..
but m a bit lazy girl..
i'l xplain dat later on..
;)

Ashu said...

mera reply sweeto ?

UTP said...

sometimes in our lives...we move parallel to our soulmate...just keep walking...without holding hands...at a distance...both waiting to make the first move to hold hands...and time passes by...

and...then...we die...never even spoken...thats life...

Nikita said...

that brings out the romantic you n the thoghtful you beautifully....

Rehaan said...

gr8 poetry mam.
i m just a beginner in this..........

Bhai with Chai said...

that's beautiful! pics toh as usual very well co-ordinated!
Hats off! :)

joiedevivre said...

@ ashu
sory yarr
m really glad u liked my poem..
i'l b writin more n more
keep cumin

joiedevivre said...

@ niki mam
big smile on my face!!

joiedevivre said...

@ rehaan
still at begining!!
thanx

joiedevivre said...

@ utp
thanx for droppin by
and yes..i live widin hopes..so will b waitin for holdin hands.
thanx!

joiedevivre said...

@ bhai
thanx yaar

Nishchal Shukla નિશ્ચલ શુક્લ said...

why cant it be called a dream?

joiedevivre said...

@ nishchal
wat question is dat yarr
i never thght it as a dream...its a moment of emotions...and hw dey change

Nishchal Shukla નિશ્ચલ શુક્લ said...

i know the poet is u and the reader cant question because its finally u who imagined it and can only describe it...but still... :)

Priya Joyce said...

Hey frnd I guess u know me now. I just wanted to inform that I have started a new blog which is full of ma funny experiences. please come to visit me.

Aneesh said...

Guess you r busy now a days :)

G-Joe said...

While thinking about what to write as a comment on your blog, I thought of having put dots instead of these insufficient words. Would have even done so presuming strongly that it would be taken as nods of being agreed with every single word(Not that I'm foolish enough to state that I understood everything... but somehow it felt like hearing the 'music' that one wishes to hear from deep down).

So thanks a ton for... dot dot dot

joiedevivre said...

@ priya
will cum very soon

joiedevivre said...

@ aneesh
haan yaar!!
thoda sa busy...will cum to blog very soon

joiedevivre said...

@ g-joe
thanx n welcum
dot dot dot
:)

mirror image said...

silence is the language of wise and of the lovers; silence is the talk of learned and the messiah; silence is the way a seed bursts out in a plant; silence is what we all share in our blogs, without being a word spoken!!!
A poetic comment for a very lovely poem (inspired by 'Shhh!!')

joiedevivre said...

@ mirror image
best language of the world!!
:)

Rehaan said...

well i really am a fan of your blog....... its a good blend of your experiences and poetry but just cant understand the title......... Escorting life to death .........

joiedevivre said...

@ rehaan
thanx
chek out my comment on
"why do we need blog" post
dere u'l get to kno d reason of name.

maverick said...

nice poem...

n a nice blog :)...

Nirav Sinha said...

Isn't a small part of us waiting for them to happen all the time when life's running at us.. the small part of us of which we expect the most!!

joiedevivre said...

@ maverick
thanx
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ nirav
hmmm...!

CutePooja said...

Wow!!!
b'ful one...
i almost lost myslf in it...

joiedevivre said...

@ cutepooja
dats d bst compliment for me
...smiling..

Scribbler said...

Impressive work :)

Thoughts on the same line.

keep it rollin;)