Thursday, August 27, 2009

फिर कुछ याद आया...



सुई में धागा आज पिरोया
कमरे की बत्ती में फिर मन खोया,

बीते दिनों में जकडे गए थे
एक बंधन से छूट रहे थे,

कोने में कुछ पड़े थे बक्से,
उन्हें खोल कर मन को आजाद कराया|

49 comments:

Hobo ........ ........ ........ said...

Depressing ???

ankita said...

ahem-ahem!!
kya baat hai...

kaviyatri Neha saheeba..
hum toh aapke fan ho gaye..

Yayaver said...

Sounds like sonnet and gives the glimpse of passing time...

Pooja said...

lovely!

The Rat... said...

jaa ladki.. if i cud read hindi i wud have been the Queen of Indore.... :(

-D Rat
Plz Vote for me at the Indiblogger contest

Pranav Kumar V said...

sach?? mera case toh ultaa hai!! Good one anyway... :D

See you when I see you... :D

prajyot said...

very nicely written..!! poem was rocking..after many months read a hindi poem

Vigneshwar said...

yaadein kabhi azaadi to kabhi bahandhan ban jaate hai
.Great 4 liner..

Fiducia said...

Quite random and yet intense!
A thought crossing a troubled mind dwelling in fate and being released to face peace..
Beautiful!!
Keep writing..:) Following ur blog!

Saim said...

once again u r successful in speaking much more with few words!!!

विनय ‘नज़र’ said...

बहुत अच्छी रचना है
-----
तख़लीक़-ए-नज़र

Pyaasa Sajal said...

nice...

Knatchbulley Hughzscene said...

subhanAllah!!!

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

"कोने में कुछ पड़े थे बक्से,
उन्हें खोल कर मन को आजाद कराया|"

corner of heart :)

गर्दूं-गाफिल said...

सुई में धागा आज पिरोया
कमरे की बत्ती में फिर मन खोया,


एक दृश्य जिसके पीछे हम जाते हैं
एक दृश्य जिसमे सोते रह जाते हैं
एक जहाँ श्रम मूल्यवान शुभ वर्धक है
किन्तु स्वप्न का श्रम सुख सभी निरर्थक है
एक प्रकाशित करता है पुरुषार्थ हमारा
एक जागरण होते ही खो जाता सारा

मन ही देवता
मन ही ईश्वर
मन से बडा न कोय

मन को पंख लगे छू आया तुरत फुरत आकाश
इतना व्यस्त,,नहीं रहता है इसे तनिक अवकाश

इसके बिना नहीं चल सकते एक कदम भी आप
अच्छा है आजाद कर लिया ,लो अब दुनिया माप

बहुत प्रभावशाली अभिव्यक्ति

joie de vivre said...

@ hobo
not at all

joie de vivre said...

@ ankita
:)
dhanyawaad!!!

joie de vivre said...

@ yayaver
exactly,
the memories lost in the time...

joie de vivre said...

@ pooja
thanks

joie de vivre said...

@ the rat
hehe..maaf karo..pata nahi tha mujhe yaarr..

voted for you :)

joie de vivre said...

@ pranav
case ulta matlab..tumhe beete din yaad nai aate ????

joie de vivre said...

@ prajyot
thanks a lott..

joie de vivre said...

@ vigneshwar
4 nai 6 lines :P

thanks anyway.

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joie de vivre said...

@ fiducia
some lines says it all..unexpressed..unexplained
right..

joie de vivre said...

@ saim
:)

joie de vivre said...

@ vinay
thanks a lot

joie de vivre said...

@ knatchbulley

here after long time.

thanks :)

joie de vivre said...

@ i'l try to be truthful

haan woh bhi..

joie de vivre said...

@ gaafil

khoob hai..


mein shayad kuch aur kehna chahti hu aapni kavita mein..

Toon India said...

beautifully written...you could be the female gulzar!!

joie de vivre said...

@ sajal
thanks

Sarath said...

seriously you should go into writing lyrics for films... much better than the inane lyrics going on nowadays...

Amrita~Ams said...

yar..mazze aa gaye neha...
mast ekdum...
hope teri next post french mai ho :P

VickY said...

memories good or bad ,can take you places...

nice jalebi nice.

tc

AS said...

wah wah! kya baat kahi :)

joie de vivre said...

@ toon india
aare nai bhai
yeh toh kuch bhi nai hai..
gulzar ka koi match nai hai :)

thanks anyway

joie de vivre said...

@ sarath
films ka toh pata nahi abhi ke liye toh blog hi theek hai. :)

joie de vivre said...

@ asmi

It would take long to write in French.

joie de vivre said...

@ vicky
exactly, we jus get carried away

joie de vivre said...

@ as
:)
thanks, aur haan m not writing under influence of any BIHARI..ha ha ha

Resurgence said...

Gal... good to see u back in form with the Hindi poem... as always kuch jyada samajh me nahi aaya... but ek question hai.... kya 'Ek bandhan'ki jagah 'Kuch bandhan' nahi hoga?

digant sutar said...

Sundar.........

joie de vivre said...

@ resurgence
:) good to see you here as well.

ek hi hai jiski baat ho rahi hai yaha..one bandhan, jus one..

joie de vivre said...

@ digant
dhanyawaad!!!

commited to life said...

wow!!
amazing

p.s was just passing by

chirag said...

aaj fir aankho main aansu hain
aaj fir labo par ek naam hain
aaj fir vahi sham hain
aaj fir aya unka paigam hain...

this lines from my side hopw u don't mind

WarmSunshine said...

translation, please? :)

Aditya said...

great lines.....i m leaving home for studies and in new city i'll be feeling nostalgic.....in those times...i'll be rhyming ur lines.......(if u permit without copyright) ...... :)