Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Aise hi kuch kuch - Part 3

they were going through a beautiful struggle
kissing silently each other on invisible mode
relocating the exchange of feeling
deep inside those dreams...

43 comments:

Anonymous said...

They ?

joie de vivre said...

@ hobo
now what
dont tell me...u didnt get this one too..

Lena said...

you use good metaphors in your poetry, makes people think.. this one is really beautiful :)

peter said...

yes i got this one !
and it's nice
but can you bring variety to ur posts plzzzz !!
I am trying to remember the last time you had a post about something other than ..uploading pics and write 3-4 liners..!

kuch aur try kar be X-(

Maddy said...

Beautiful!!!! Though it is not a Haiku......the essence of the poem is there

SMRITI said...

Tuition timings please... time set karte hain :( plzzzzz :(

Bata de date aur time..main aa jaungi.... :(

Trinaa said...

oye whr do u get these awesome pix from???

Priya Joyce said...

Someone seems to be falling in love :P:P

joie de vivre said...

@ lena
just something out of imagination it is.. :)

thank you

joie de vivre said...

@ pinku
variety??
thats the way i write..

will try something else too.

joie de vivre said...

@ maddy
it never was intended to be taken as Haiku..
just a momentary expression in few lines..

:D

joie de vivre said...

@ smriti
aaree bilkul..
isi bahane tujhe milna ho jayega..
tu toh maharani hai..milti hi nai
maha busy

joie de vivre said...

@ tinni
shtyle hai babeh...
:P

joie de vivre said...

@ pj
fallin bole toh giri hui
:P

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

beautiful struggle. invisible mode! wowwwww beautiful and romantic. :)

Phoenix said...

precise and beautifully expressed..

Nikhil Menon said...

next time arnd,give a link to wer u get these pics from..Btw,is that U and HIM??? :p

take care dearie.. :)

Nikhil

digant sutar said...

hmmm...
jaise jaise kahani aage bad rahi hai
creativity bhi aage badh rahi hai!
achha hai :)

The Furobiker said...

cool one :)

Anirudh 'Lallan' Choudhry said...

beautiful... how romantic

WarmSunshine said...

sweet... very very sweet :)

joie de vivre said...

@ preeti
full of love.
:D

joie de vivre said...

@ raka
and m sooo happy to see you again

joie de vivre said...

@ nikhil
hehe
this is not me and HIM :P

joie de vivre said...

@ digant
abhi picture baki hai mere dost

joie de vivre said...

@ abhishek
and i thought this is HOT :P

joie de vivre said...

@ anirudh

:D
:D
:D
:D

joie de vivre said...

@ mehreen
oopsss m gettin daibetic

Suyog Shopurkar said...

this is the struggle ............that can be enjoyed and relished !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Priya Joyce said...

lol joie ki bacchi aaj kal bade pj's crack karne lagi hei? :P

tat's ma job
samjhii???

Pranav Kumar V said...

Whoa!! Invisible mode and dreams?? Now THATs something :D

Sounds great though!! OK. STOP THINKING PK!! :P

See you when I see you... :)

joie de vivre said...

@ suyog

yeah..who would deny that

joie de vivre said...

@ pj
hehe..ok ok you are the master.

joie de vivre said...

@ pranav
no body will charge you for dreaming.. :P

chalne do!!

BIG Omi said...

I didnt understood the theme.. mebbe cuz i visited these for the first time.. but the feelings really made the point clear.. its touchy !!

Dosth said...

"Drink with me only with thine eyes..
And i will pledge with mine.
Or leave a kiss but in the cup..
And I will not drink for the wine."

..wrote once a famous poet.

i think that if we look into our dreams we see the real working of the soul..

these dreams are certainly worth looking into...

Gud luck..my girl..!!

ceedy said...

have been away - read the kuch kuches from before

this journey seems to make you more and more creative :)

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joie de vivre said...

@ big omi
thanks for dropping

joie de vivre said...

@ dosth
kaash mein bhi aise likh pau

luck ka good hona bohot jarrori hai
:D

joie de vivre said...

@ ceedy
kuch kuches..i like that

thanks!!
lets see how far they go

Nidhi said...

:) is someone falling in love ;)

joie de vivre said...

@ nidhi
:) samajh jao