Monday, September 15, 2008

Further On

one more year, fleeting through life
crammed with shade's and glow
feeling liable and grown
understanding affairs of ages
looking at the rear to collect hope
believing to get best of myself.

99 comments:

k.ø.c.h.ü said...

"cool...":)

so frm now on ill comment 'short' wen u type 'short' ha..deal..?? he he

Smriti Srivastava said...

That's so nicely put. :) I like the use of pics in your blogs... real nice!! :)

Hugs!!

ANWESA said...

SUBTLE N TOUCHING..KUDOS..

Hemanth Potluri said...

good one neha..

understanding affairs of ages


wow...nice thought..

urs..hemu..

HOBO said...

Man best search is to find the best within himself/herself.
Nice post.

Aneesh said...

it's just september, still we have time in this year :)
what affair did you understand?

Iceman said...

Happy Birthday!
LOL... I am bad @ guessing!

∂єяαngє∂ ιnѕαnιту ^.^ said...

Continuing with deal above :D

Striking!

peter said...

Why do I think as if ur b'day has arrived or is it ova ..??
he he ..nice post there :P

happy blogging :)

lukkydivz said...

lol @ iceman and peter :D Happy birthday neha!!

chocolate cake :x

Priyanshu Uniyal said...

cho chweet :) Too melting thought...

Sri said...

First time visitor to your blogsite!Lovely poem!Sensible sentence!Gr8 work!

digant sutar said...

Belated or in advance ' Happy Birth-Day ':)

Really cool way to look at a Year.I like following line the most
'understanding affairs of ages'
Every year we understands new affairs of ages...

Nice....

my inner world said...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!!!!

NJOY !!

BEAUTIFUL LINES :)

Trinaa said...

loved it!! thats the best way of looking at things i guess..rock on babz!!

joiedevivre said...

@ nithin

hehe nai no deal
tu wahi likh jo tujhe lagta hai..may it b short or long

aur kochu u got wat i said?? ke yuhi likh diya cool

joiedevivre said...

@ smriti
thanx a lot

hugs to u

joiedevivre said...

@ anwesa

:)
:)
:)

thanx

joiedevivre said...

@ hemanth
yeah m trying to understand more..
evryday i get to kno sumthing new

:)

joiedevivre said...

@ hobo

yeah very true
n my journey is goin on!!

joiedevivre said...

@ aneesh
yeah i kno..but september happens to b my favourite month of year..

affair means all relationships of my life..
as a daughter..sister..bst frnd.. frnd!!!
samjha

joiedevivre said...

@ iceman

haha
nai its not my bday
usme thoda time hai
its a feeling before my bday
i feel matured n grown

joiedevivre said...

@ deranged insanity

gr8
:)

Priya Joyce said...

accha toh birthday ke bare mein bole rahi hai too
aur tat with every new b'day u grow mature hai na?

arre abhi tak award nahi liya toone grrr!!

joiedevivre said...

@ peter
haan my bday is gonna cum

again poem..cant help it
i just luv writing dem

joiedevivre said...

@ kukkydivz

haha
nai abhi baday nai hai mera
aane wala hai

joiedevivre said...

@ priyanshu
thanx a lot
:))

joiedevivre said...

@ sri
thank u
will visit you soon

joiedevivre said...

@ digant
hmm...i really wrked for dat line
..to get d real meaning out of it
n m glad i did it

:)

joiedevivre said...

@ my inner world

thanks but bday aaj nai hai aane wala hai

;P

joiedevivre said...

@ tinni
yeah u guessed absolutly rite beta

:)

joiedevivre said...

@ pj

haanji ekdum sai kaha aapne
aur award le rai hu meri ma naraz mat ho

:P

lukkydivz said...

who is kukkydivz :O

btw..kab hai tumhara budday? choco cake khilana padega :O :P

joiedevivre said...

@ lukkydivz
haha correct dis time

its on 27th
haan mere ghar aaja cake khane

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

And may you get the best! :)

comfortably numb said...

one more year...b'day visited else u follow a diff calendar:D
if b'day...happy b'day
if calendar...tell us wich 1:D

Chaggoholic.... said...

Hmmn cute pic and a sensitive verse.Nice....

Sach! said...

you just reminded me of the day I am about to begin my new semester...7 sems n I have had similar thoughts..hopes...wishes...
But cud u temme what new year are you starting?
In case budday times,(since you're a libra)
Yappiieee Budddaayyyyy!!!!
*hugs*

Comfortably Numb said...

This was nice...Nicely said in the minimum number of words :)

Cheers!!

Lena said...

you sound somehow philosophical, getting older? :P or rather feeling more matured?

Red Eyes said...

love the title of this blog

joiedevivre said...

@ samy
i hope so dear

joiedevivre said...

@ numb
haha
nai no different calender
its my bday...abt to cum..

joiedevivre said...

@ chaggoholic
hmm
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ sach
yeah m paaki "libran"
n its my bday..aane wala hai
m excited lik chote baache hote hai na
also i feel grown..big girl!!

joiedevivre said...

@ comfortably numb
cheers!!
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ lena
haha
buddi nai ho rai hu
feeling matured.
:P

joiedevivre said...

@ red eyes

thanx
:)

Rajesh said...

Well written...that pic was so so cute...and ur write-up was SHORT but SWEET...keep writing..

Do find time to drop in to ma blog...tc

k.ø.c.h.ü said...

Hope de legendary joeiedevivre won't make de birthday treat "short"...! N mate i dono 2 shoot back in hindi... :-(
'papu can't say much hindi sala'

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

happy birthday {belated ) :)

Toonfactory said...

Woww....Beautiful Feelings Brilliantly penned down...
:)

Bhai with Chai said...

//looking at the rear to collect hope
believing to get best of myself.


wow!

•♥•♥Vicky♥•♥• said...

nicely written..

how to understand affairs of ages??
:o

joiedevivre said...

@ rajesh
thank u so much
:)
a bit busy dese days, will surely come.

tats

joiedevivre said...

@ pappu i mean kochu

no wories...it will b wekkend party
fultu fun n masti

joiedevivre said...

@ i'l try to be truthful

abhi nai asli bday pe wish karna
:P

joiedevivre said...

@ toonfactory

thankeee

joiedevivre said...

@ bhaiya

hmm
:)
:)
:)

Shrav said...

Touching..Nice pics you use!!


P.s:I've linked you.. If you like mine do link me back!!

joiedevivre said...

@ shrav

thanx :)

joiedevivre said...

@ v
matlab
i dint get u?

•♥•♥Vicky♥•♥• said...

u wrote in the poem na??
i was just asking about that

Keshi said...

very cute pic..love it Joi!


Was it ur bday? if so HUGS n HAPPY BIRTHDAY luv!

years pass by, like a flash of light...but the soul never grows old. Stay beautiful!


Keshi.

rantravereflect/ jane said...

crisp n yet, it flows on :)

loved teh pic!

Pooja said...

short,sweet n nice...

joiedevivre said...

@ V
ok ok
i'l xplain it

affair means all relationships of my life..evry role i play

evry relation ship added sumthing to my personality..
n now i hav started feelin grown n matured..hav started realising dere importance..

•♥•♥Vicky♥•♥• said...

got it :)
i have started realizing their importance too lately.

joiedevivre said...

@ keshi

tthanx dear
well my bday is gonna cum soon
:)
***soul never grows old.

joiedevivre said...

@ jane
thanx a lot!!

:)

joiedevivre said...

@ pooja
thank u thank u and thank u

Abhishek Khanna said...

hmm.. tu badi hoke ek din bahut famous author/poetess banegi..
pakki baat hai

joiedevivre said...

@ abhishek
baap re..yeh toh jyada ho gaya bhai
but nyways..thank u soo much
dats a real big compliment
m honoured if u feel lik dis

Sarath said...

feeling all grown up??

Akshaya Kamalnath said...

Man that was a powerful poem written in so few wrds. Interesting blog you've got here.

Nidhi said...

Belated Happy Birthday Dear !!

Happy Growing Up :)

joiedevivre said...

@ sarath
yeah.

joiedevivre said...

@ akshaya
thank u
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ nidhi
thanx but mera bday aane wala hai
so u hav one more chance to wish me

;)

shooting star said...

life is so fast in the present tense but so slow in the past tense...

joiedevivre said...

@ shooting star
really is dat so?
i never felt dis way

prajyot said...

well..joje..very touching post...

humbl devil said...

looking at the rear to collect hope

rofl...

lyf mai thodi paagal panti bhi zaruri hai >:P

other than that, nys thots...

Anindita said...

You are good. Those lines stirred some thoughts. Nice, filled with minute soul stirring lines... :)

joiedevivre said...

@ prajyot
thanx
aur mera naam joje nai hai joie hai..
filhaal naam change karne ka mera koi irada nai hai.
;)

joiedevivre said...

@ devil
haan kyu nai
life isnt only abt philosophy..
masti toh full time chalte renha chahiye

yeah n to ur question
my ans is no

joiedevivre said...

@ anindita
thanx dear

Pranay said...

Wats with Blogger these days??? Everyone's coming up with these growing up posts...:D.

I liked it. Simple and to the point. Btw, did u intentionally use d apostrophe after shade? :P

Oh Birthday??!! Happy Birthday from me!!

Shashank said...

good one, nicely framed

joiedevivre said...

@ pyanay
yeah it was intensionally

bday aane wala hai..
nyways thanx

and yeah hav replied to ur comment on your other blog

joiedevivre said...

@ shashank
thanx

Pranay said...

Yeah I had seen it. Thanx. You should go through some previous posts of mine like the one on our ICU. Sadly I didnt write more posts...regret it.
Wishes in advance...Reward toh diya nahi, Bday ki treat hi de de...:P. Apostrophe nahi samjha but cool, dats usual.

prajyot said...

good post...very nicely written

joiedevivre said...

@ pranay
hmm treat chahiye..
ja mere taraf se party mana le

;))

joiedevivre said...

@ prajyot
thanx frnd

Nidhi said...

You ve been blogrolled :)

¢яŷştąŁ said...

Subtle,short,crisp and touching!

:)


Awaiting fr more!

joiedevivre said...

@ nidhi
u too

joiedevivre said...

@ crystal

:)