Sunday, September 7, 2008

* :) *

" simple sound echoed in ears
melody humming in breath
auras mingled with each other
it was a varied season of life
when they closely located the evening star"

103 comments:

Hemanth Potluri said...

auras mingled ....



this whole word says abt love..
diffrent types of people migling to know and care for each other....wonderfull and awesome...neha...ur a master piece..in these short poems..:)..

urs..hemu..

lukkydivz said...

gosh how dyu write this :O
i've read some of the previous ones too, spellbound to say the least!

hmm so joie is neha? :)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Ah so romantic! :)

Iceman said...

lovely.. I had once written something strikingly similar...

whispers fell on ears
warm breaths fell on their cheeks
scent of one another enticed
them to cling on in unison
make a wish as we behold the shooting star...

old skool... hmm wow almost its a decade since I scribbled that!

good job... ur line have an amazing chaste in em! well done!

Bhai with Chai said...

ohhho.. "more to come" *wink*
whatsup??
*wink, wink*

nice! :)

Rehaan said...

really...... u r so romantic in ur poems...... actually now i have started to understand ur poems....

mystic rose said...

thanks for the applause :)

and applause here as well .

k.ø.c.h.ü said...

hmmm...gal...u've been hit listed...gainin mastery over de concept of 'brevity' ha..i've fallen in luv wid this...!!!

hmmm...

Nikita said...

now i have to ask as some of u'r other blogger frns..u find the picture first or the words???? n reason for u'r being sooooooo romantic these days..;-)...nething goin on in u'r life i dont know about?.....huh?

maverick said...

hmm...love is fantastic aint it..n awesome piece of writing....

Buzzz said...

Amazing lines again :)

And this is what we call luv, isnt it ? Right up there. we call it luv and u create magic once again with ur 4 liners buddy!!

humbl devil said...

lagta hai joie ko koi mil gaya...
:)

where do you get the inspiration???

Sarath said...

seriously, I am considering taking classes from you to write poetry and understand it also. will you?

Aneesh said...

Cool!
They closely located the evening star?
Which star was it?
:)

Trinaa said...

so romantic..! siiiiiigh.. :))

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

:) *that mushy feeling*

Dosth said...

wow...this really is beautiful...

the biggest achievement of any artist is when he/she has created a style of their own...

i think u have reached...and it certainly has captured many a hearts...

John Keats..the master poet...said.."Poetry should please by a fine excess and not by singularity. It should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts, and appear almost as a remembrance."

this is exactly what one feels when one reads ur 'liners'..


and the fact that most of them is related to love...is like a bonus..


again..u make me proud...

ceedy said...

first time here....and a beautiful words :)

prajyot said...

wow...wat a lovely romantic poem..short yet sweet

∂єяαngє∂ ιnѕαnιту ^.^ said...

Reminds me of Enrique!

You can hide, you can run, but you cannot escape my love! ;)

Love again man! Uff! lol

Pranay said...

Wow...some one is pretty happy nowadays....:)..

A J...ツ said...

Beautifully beautiful, lady :))

Pooja said...

Beautiful!!!

mayz said...

d last line said it all...its so magical!!!

Chaggoholic.... said...

Amazingly sweet and beautiful....

Crystal.. said...

Short and sweet!!


Fab!

HOBO said...

One soul...

digant sutar said...

A romantic delight....

Think Tank said...

and wished upon it? great i hope they find all the haooiness together.

joiedevivre said...

@ hemanth

thanx
keep visitin for more poems..
ders a lot to cum up

joiedevivre said...

@ lukkydivz
thanx dear..
i just write the way i feel, simple!!
der's no other techneque

:)

joiedevivre said...

@ samy
luv is evrywhere dese days..

joiedevivre said...

@ lukkydivz

yeah joie n neha are me.

joiedevivre said...

@ icey

thanx..
and yeah ur lines were really gud.

i wish to read dat...do u hav dat on ur blog..
forward me the link

joiedevivre said...

@ bhaiya

hehe
aisa kuch nai hua hai bhai..
bas penn chal raha hai aur mein likh rai hu..

joiedevivre said...

@ rehaan
oh dats great..
now u get them huh..
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ mystic rose

thank u

:)

joiedevivre said...

@ nithin

sabse pehle wat is K O C H U..
wat does dat mean??

hmm hit list kar diya mujhe..hehhe
thanx yaar
m developing my own style to write..

joiedevivre said...

@ nikki mam
nahh aisa bas ek baar kiya tha..
dis one was wriiten first, it was really difficult to find d pic..
but finally dis one i got.
nice na?
hmm yeah m gettin romantic..i dnt kno y..(hormonal imbalance i think)

kuch special hoga toh surely will tell u..

joiedevivre said...

@ maverick

thank u thank u thank u

joiedevivre said...

@ buzz

yeah dis is wat we call luv..
thanx yaar
i luv to rite dis way..4 liner.

joiedevivre said...

@ devil
nai re...abhi koi nai mila
hunt is goin
haha

inspiration...i dnt kno
seriously.

joiedevivre said...

@ sarath

yeah sure y not

:)

joiedevivre said...

@ aneesh
nai re..
woh wala star nai hai yeh
its a figure os speech.
try to understand dat..it has deep meaning

joiedevivre said...

@ tinni

yeah.
i wonder hw d real feeling feel

joiedevivre said...

@ i'l try to be truthful

truth hai ki nai hai yeh??
hehe

joiedevivre said...

@ dosth
u think i hav reached..m smiling
badi smile

:)))))

joiedevivre said...

@ ceedy

thanx for dropping
welcum to d blog

joiedevivre said...

@ prajyot
thanx yaar..

joiedevivre said...

@ deranged insanity

u kno enrique is one of my favourites..
luved it

joiedevivre said...

@ pranay

waise m alwayas hapy..abhi kuch bhi special nai hai..

and where r u? u r lost?

joiedevivre said...

@ aj

smiles n more smiles

thank u

joiedevivre said...

@ pooja

thanx dear

joiedevivre said...

@ mayz

it is..
:)
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ chaggoholic

thanx

u r welcum on blog

joiedevivre said...

@ crystal

thankee dear

joiedevivre said...

@ hobo

wow..u said rite
just in a wrd
...dats wat i felt while writing

joiedevivre said...

@ digant

yeah..
u hav sumthin lik dis in ur painting??

joiedevivre said...

@ think tank

hmm this cud hav beenn added..
yeah i hope
gid bless dem
keep dere luv alive

Pranay said...

Oh, toh lines purely fictional hai kya? I like your style...very original although some of the stuff does tend to bounce off my head...:P
I m here..:).Just checking blogs...cant think of anything good enough to post...Stupid idle mind!!!

Toonfactory said...

Wowww....beautiful...I wonder how can U pen down such wonderful thoughts :)

Iceman said...

well... i was a regular writer once upon a time... college days, almost a decade now!
used to scribble a lot...
write em down these lines where ever i could... had a dairy kinda thing...

I've lost most of them while i was in transition, as I have hopped around a lot of places over the last decade...

and had a blog of poems.. but then, deleted em...

so as of now.. everything is safe within me... :D, they would come to the surface when I see something that evoke similar feelings when I wrote them .

You would see some lines here n there in my current blog... every once in a while.. depending on my mood swings.

But.. u write well...
Keep up the great work.

CgFreak said...

Touching lines... Sho shweet Very nice! :)

joiedevivre said...

@ pranay
haan sab fictional hai
koi nai yaar keep onreading u'l get d gist

i always try to keep my 4 liner very simple..yet it bcomes difficult for some people.

joiedevivre said...

@ toonfactory
hmm bas ho jata hai

thanx
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ cgfreak

thanx a lot
:)

my inner world said...

really really romantic !!!

Aneesh said...

oh,Sorry! you know, I am never good in understanding deep meanings. LOL

peter said...

hey ..try to bring lil different thngs ..dun continue the pattern for so long ...u knw wat I mean !!

tho these poems are mind blowing ..and I love short poems and posts but still want to see u writing other thngs ..like wat earlier u did !!

I hope u understand wat i am trying to say :P

happy blogging !

comfortably numb said...

d bliss of togetherness:)

ANWESA said...

hey,nice lines,gr8 going..

Keshi said...

Im not sure if I ever experienced that kinda love...

Keshi.

Lena said...

its fantastic dear! loved the use of words and the romantic mood it created :)

Chaggoholic.... said...

Hey a new one posted by me.Check it out.Wud be fun...

Parul Gupta said...

romantic lines...

k.ø.c.h.ü said...

yupp kozhu'z ma pet name...'kochu' means ahem ahem...'kid'....!mammaas kid...hmmmm...

maverick said...

so still hunting or koi milgaya??

Scribblers Inc said...

oh jeez...

ScribblersInc.

joiedevivre said...

@ my inner world

:) :) :)

joiedevivre said...

@ peter

yeah i got dat..but i luv writing poems
n dese days m filled wid tghts of luv..i dnt kno y
n i dnt feel lik writing anythin else..

joiedevivre said...

@ numb

yes yes
:0)

joiedevivre said...

@ anwesa

thanx yaar

joiedevivre said...

@ keshi

hmm mayb
luv has infinite forms to express to feel to say

joiedevivre said...

@ lena
it created d mood?? realyy

thanx

joiedevivre said...

@ parul

smiles :)

joiedevivre said...

@ maverick

haha
nai yaar..koi nai mila..
abhi huntimg rok di hai for somtime..

rantravereflect/ jane said...

geeeee,, evening stars-->awwww boy, that was romatique!!

sound and aura --> two things that need to get together when two peopel get togetehr :)

joiedevivre said...

@ jane

oye ur name is too big..dnt mind i'l call u simply jane

thanx
:)

peter said...

ahaaaan I see :P

good good :D

joiedevivre said...

@ scribbler

one thing apart frm comment
do u speak less?

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

matlab?? ;P

joiedevivre said...

@ i'l try to be truthful

aare i was kiddin
ke tum sach keh rai ho ya jhooth..as ur name says try to be truthful...

Rajesh said...

Was exceptional...i jus wonder how ppl cud write such beautiful lines...keep it going..

Blogrolling U :)

P.S: Do drop in to my blog sometime

joiedevivre said...

@ rajesh
thanx a lot..

u r already blogrolled
will surely drop in

Priya Joyce said...

very very nice piece neha romantic to great depth sach mein.

my inner world said...

You been awarded by me, have a look, cheers !!!!

Crystal.. said...

you're flawless with it!

muaah..was "WOW"

joiedevivre said...

@ my inner world

aww
thanks yaar

joiedevivre said...

@ crystal
m flawles??
dats a big comment
thanx for pappi
haha

joiedevivre said...

@ pj
u r d one who always had apperciated my poems, not only by comments thru ur mails as well

luvz

k.ø.c.h.ü said...

Oye! Centurian neha! Wooo...here is de 101st comment! Nothin new he he...!

Nidhi said...

Beautiful :)

Mingled Auras...

These lines remind me so much of the song from U me Aur Hum...

"Apne rang gawaaye bin, mere rang mein ghul jao…
Apni dhoop bujhaye bin, meri chhaon mein aa jao…
Chalo yoon karein…
Tum… tum bhi raho…
Main… main bhi rahoon…
Hum… hum bhi rahien…

Teeno mil ke saath chalein..
Saathi janam janam…

U Me Aur Hum"

joiedevivre said...

@ nidhi
:)