this whole word says abt love.. diffrent types of people migling to know and care for each other....wonderfull and awesome...neha...ur a master piece..in these short poems..:)..
lovely.. I had once written something strikingly similar...
whispers fell on ears warm breaths fell on their cheeks scent of one another enticed them to cling on in unison make a wish as we behold the shooting star...
old skool... hmm wow almost its a decade since I scribbled that!
good job... ur line have an amazing chaste in em! well done!
now i have to ask as some of u'r other blogger frns..u find the picture first or the words???? n reason for u'r being sooooooo romantic these days..;-)...nething goin on in u'r life i dont know about?.....huh?
the biggest achievement of any artist is when he/she has created a style of their own...
i think u have reached...and it certainly has captured many a hearts...
John Keats..the master poet...said.."Poetry should please by a fine excess and not by singularity. It should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts, and appear almost as a remembrance."
this is exactly what one feels when one reads ur 'liners'..
and the fact that most of them is related to love...is like a bonus..
@ nikki mam nahh aisa bas ek baar kiya tha.. dis one was wriiten first, it was really difficult to find d pic.. but finally dis one i got. nice na? hmm yeah m gettin romantic..i dnt kno y..(hormonal imbalance i think)
Oh, toh lines purely fictional hai kya? I like your style...very original although some of the stuff does tend to bounce off my head...:P I m here..:).Just checking blogs...cant think of anything good enough to post...Stupid idle mind!!!
well... i was a regular writer once upon a time... college days, almost a decade now! used to scribble a lot... write em down these lines where ever i could... had a dairy kinda thing...
I've lost most of them while i was in transition, as I have hopped around a lot of places over the last decade...
and had a blog of poems.. but then, deleted em...
so as of now.. everything is safe within me... :D, they would come to the surface when I see something that evoke similar feelings when I wrote them .
You would see some lines here n there in my current blog... every once in a while.. depending on my mood swings.
These lines remind me so much of the song from U me Aur Hum...
"Apne rang gawaaye bin, mere rang mein ghul jao… Apni dhoop bujhaye bin, meri chhaon mein aa jao… Chalo yoon karein… Tum… tum bhi raho… Main… main bhi rahoon… Hum… hum bhi rahien…
" simple sound echoed in ears
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auras mingled ....
this whole word says abt love..
diffrent types of people migling to know and care for each other....wonderfull and awesome...neha...ur a master piece..in these short poems..:)..
urs..hemu..
gosh how dyu write this :O
i've read some of the previous ones too, spellbound to say the least!
hmm so joie is neha? :)
Ah so romantic! :)
lovely.. I had once written something strikingly similar...
whispers fell on ears
warm breaths fell on their cheeks
scent of one another enticed
them to cling on in unison
make a wish as we behold the shooting star...
old skool... hmm wow almost its a decade since I scribbled that!
good job... ur line have an amazing chaste in em! well done!
ohhho.. "more to come" *wink*
whatsup??
*wink, wink*
nice! :)
thanks for the applause :)
and applause here as well .
hmmm...gal...u've been hit listed...gainin mastery over de concept of 'brevity' ha..i've fallen in luv wid this...!!!
hmmm...
now i have to ask as some of u'r other blogger frns..u find the picture first or the words???? n reason for u'r being sooooooo romantic these days..;-)...nething goin on in u'r life i dont know about?.....huh?
hmm...love is fantastic aint it..n awesome piece of writing....
Amazing lines again :)
And this is what we call luv, isnt it ? Right up there. we call it luv and u create magic once again with ur 4 liners buddy!!
lagta hai joie ko koi mil gaya...
:)
where do you get the inspiration???
seriously, I am considering taking classes from you to write poetry and understand it also. will you?
Cool!
They closely located the evening star?
Which star was it?
:)
so romantic..! siiiiiigh.. :))
:) *that mushy feeling*
wow...this really is beautiful...
the biggest achievement of any artist is when he/she has created a style of their own...
i think u have reached...and it certainly has captured many a hearts...
John Keats..the master poet...said.."Poetry should please by a fine excess and not by singularity. It should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts, and appear almost as a remembrance."
this is exactly what one feels when one reads ur 'liners'..
and the fact that most of them is related to love...is like a bonus..
again..u make me proud...
first time here....and a beautiful words :)
wow...wat a lovely romantic poem..short yet sweet
Reminds me of Enrique!
You can hide, you can run, but you cannot escape my love! ;)
Love again man! Uff! lol
Wow...some one is pretty happy nowadays....:)..
Beautifully beautiful, lady :))
Beautiful!!!
d last line said it all...its so magical!!!
Amazingly sweet and beautiful....
Short and sweet!!
Fab!
One soul...
A romantic delight....
and wished upon it? great i hope they find all the haooiness together.
@ hemanth
thanx
keep visitin for more poems..
ders a lot to cum up
@ lukkydivz
thanx dear..
i just write the way i feel, simple!!
der's no other techneque
:)
@ samy
luv is evrywhere dese days..
@ lukkydivz
yeah joie n neha are me.
@ icey
thanx..
and yeah ur lines were really gud.
i wish to read dat...do u hav dat on ur blog..
forward me the link
@ bhaiya
hehe
aisa kuch nai hua hai bhai..
bas penn chal raha hai aur mein likh rai hu..
@ rehaan
oh dats great..
now u get them huh..
:)
@ mystic rose
thank u
:)
@ nithin
sabse pehle wat is K O C H U..
wat does dat mean??
hmm hit list kar diya mujhe..hehhe
thanx yaar
m developing my own style to write..
@ nikki mam
nahh aisa bas ek baar kiya tha..
dis one was wriiten first, it was really difficult to find d pic..
but finally dis one i got.
nice na?
hmm yeah m gettin romantic..i dnt kno y..(hormonal imbalance i think)
kuch special hoga toh surely will tell u..
@ maverick
thank u thank u thank u
@ buzz
yeah dis is wat we call luv..
thanx yaar
i luv to rite dis way..4 liner.
@ devil
nai re...abhi koi nai mila
hunt is goin
haha
inspiration...i dnt kno
seriously.
@ sarath
yeah sure y not
:)
@ aneesh
nai re..
woh wala star nai hai yeh
its a figure os speech.
try to understand dat..it has deep meaning
@ tinni
yeah.
i wonder hw d real feeling feel
@ i'l try to be truthful
truth hai ki nai hai yeh??
hehe
@ dosth
u think i hav reached..m smiling
badi smile
:)))))
@ ceedy
thanx for dropping
welcum to d blog
@ prajyot
thanx yaar..
@ deranged insanity
u kno enrique is one of my favourites..
luved it
@ pranay
waise m alwayas hapy..abhi kuch bhi special nai hai..
and where r u? u r lost?
@ aj
smiles n more smiles
thank u
@ pooja
thanx dear
@ mayz
it is..
:)
:)
@ chaggoholic
thanx
u r welcum on blog
@ crystal
thankee dear
@ hobo
wow..u said rite
just in a wrd
...dats wat i felt while writing
@ digant
yeah..
u hav sumthin lik dis in ur painting??
@ think tank
hmm this cud hav beenn added..
yeah i hope
gid bless dem
keep dere luv alive
Oh, toh lines purely fictional hai kya? I like your style...very original although some of the stuff does tend to bounce off my head...:P
I m here..:).Just checking blogs...cant think of anything good enough to post...Stupid idle mind!!!
Wowww....beautiful...I wonder how can U pen down such wonderful thoughts :)
well... i was a regular writer once upon a time... college days, almost a decade now!
used to scribble a lot...
write em down these lines where ever i could... had a dairy kinda thing...
I've lost most of them while i was in transition, as I have hopped around a lot of places over the last decade...
and had a blog of poems.. but then, deleted em...
so as of now.. everything is safe within me... :D, they would come to the surface when I see something that evoke similar feelings when I wrote them .
You would see some lines here n there in my current blog... every once in a while.. depending on my mood swings.
But.. u write well...
Keep up the great work.
Touching lines... Sho shweet Very nice! :)
@ pranay
haan sab fictional hai
koi nai yaar keep onreading u'l get d gist
i always try to keep my 4 liner very simple..yet it bcomes difficult for some people.
@ toonfactory
hmm bas ho jata hai
thanx
:)
@ cgfreak
thanx a lot
:)
really really romantic !!!
oh,Sorry! you know, I am never good in understanding deep meanings. LOL
hey ..try to bring lil different thngs ..dun continue the pattern for so long ...u knw wat I mean !!
tho these poems are mind blowing ..and I love short poems and posts but still want to see u writing other thngs ..like wat earlier u did !!
I hope u understand wat i am trying to say :P
happy blogging !
d bliss of togetherness:)
hey,nice lines,gr8 going..
Im not sure if I ever experienced that kinda love...
Keshi.
its fantastic dear! loved the use of words and the romantic mood it created :)
Hey a new one posted by me.Check it out.Wud be fun...
romantic lines...
yupp kozhu'z ma pet name...'kochu' means ahem ahem...'kid'....!mammaas kid...hmmmm...
so still hunting or koi milgaya??
oh jeez...
ScribblersInc.
@ my inner world
:) :) :)
@ peter
yeah i got dat..but i luv writing poems
n dese days m filled wid tghts of luv..i dnt kno y
n i dnt feel lik writing anythin else..
@ numb
yes yes
:0)
@ anwesa
thanx yaar
@ keshi
hmm mayb
luv has infinite forms to express to feel to say
@ lena
it created d mood?? realyy
thanx
@ parul
smiles :)
@ maverick
haha
nai yaar..koi nai mila..
abhi huntimg rok di hai for somtime..
geeeee,, evening stars-->awwww boy, that was romatique!!
sound and aura --> two things that need to get together when two peopel get togetehr :)
@ jane
oye ur name is too big..dnt mind i'l call u simply jane
thanx
:)
ahaaaan I see :P
good good :D
@ scribbler
one thing apart frm comment
do u speak less?
matlab?? ;P
@ i'l try to be truthful
aare i was kiddin
ke tum sach keh rai ho ya jhooth..as ur name says try to be truthful...
Was exceptional...i jus wonder how ppl cud write such beautiful lines...keep it going..
Blogrolling U :)
P.S: Do drop in to my blog sometime
@ rajesh
thanx a lot..
u r already blogrolled
will surely drop in
very very nice piece neha romantic to great depth sach mein.
You been awarded by me, have a look, cheers !!!!
you're flawless with it!
muaah..was "WOW"
@ my inner world
aww
thanks yaar
@ crystal
m flawles??
dats a big comment
thanx for pappi
haha
@ pj
u r d one who always had apperciated my poems, not only by comments thru ur mails as well
luvz
Oye! Centurian neha! Wooo...here is de 101st comment! Nothin new he he...!
Beautiful :)
Mingled Auras...
These lines remind me so much of the song from U me Aur Hum...
"Apne rang gawaaye bin, mere rang mein ghul jao…
Apni dhoop bujhaye bin, meri chhaon mein aa jao…
Chalo yoon karein…
Tum… tum bhi raho…
Main… main bhi rahoon…
Hum… hum bhi rahien…
Teeno mil ke saath chalein..
Saathi janam janam…
U Me Aur Hum"
@ nidhi
:)
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