Monday, April 27, 2009

एक रात के साये में
थोड़ी से परछाई में,
खोज रहा था ख़ुद को वो
मांग रहा था जीवन वो,
खुली आँखों में था वो सपना
मंजिल दूर किनारे और तिनका,
सिमटी हाथो की रेखाएं
कहती उसको चलते जाए,
नहीं अकेला था में आया
में और मेरा हमसाया..

56 comments:

peter said...

MAdam yeh hindi wale post samjh nahi atey aapkey ..mujhey angreezi mein iska anuwad chaiye :P

pisku said...

mere palleh to nai padi :((

tinkerbell said...

wow!! i needed tuition for hindi, n they're talented ones like you, who can write poetry in hindi, n that too so well..!! i got most of it, but whose the humsaaya supposed to be ??

Hemanth Potluri said...

meri hindi tho poor hai :(....


but good abt u and ur :)

urs..hemu..

WarmSunshine said...

Me can't understand :(

Hobo ........ ........ ........ said...

Thats ME.
:)

Sam said...

welcome back mate :)

Anonymous said...

i was waiting since very long time for this post , and the wait is over now

nic post.....the fight against inner black !!

SUYOG

enchantinganki said...

its so beautiful neha..

btw kaha jane ka irada hai madam :-D??

I did not get the end...though i u'stand hindi very well..!

nevertheless,lovely work re :-)

Yayaver said...

बहुत सुंदर कविता है पर कहीं दर्द दबा हुआ लगता है...खुद को खोजती हुए ज़िंदगी जेसे..

comfortably numb said...

n the journey continues...may u reach the destination too but I guess even the road together is pure bliss:)

Amrita~Ams said...

billo rani...:D :D...
after a long tym...
I again read ur post thrice to get that :P

Pranky said...

Wow!!! Great........ bahut sahi likha...
Zindagi ki kuch unsuljhi baatain...

Rakesh said...

Very cute... I mean your new pic :)

And ya, very interesting poem as well :) but needs a lil explaining for novices like us.

I mean, does it mean that a person shouldn't loose hope and work towards his dreams because he doesn't ever walk alone. His shadow is at least always with him...

joiedevivre said...

@ pinku
hindi hamari matrabhasha hai pinkude...itna toh easy hai..

anuwad nahi ho sakega yaar uska feel chala jayega

joiedevivre said...

@ pisku
kyu yarr??
you were not able to link in between the lines

joiedevivre said...

@ isra
m really glad if you think so..have just started writing in hindi sometime back..
abhi toh bohot kuch seekhna hai, yeh toh abs shruat hai..
it will be my pleasure to help you with any kind of writing
:D

joiedevivre said...

@ hemzi
i kno ur hindi is poor..will try to translate it okie

joiedevivre said...

@ mehreen
oops!
:P

joiedevivre said...

@ hobo
thats even better
:D

joiedevivre said...

@ sam
thank you soo much sam
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ suyog
Thank you, i had been away from blog for sometime..i feels great to be back

joiedevivre said...

@ ankita
thanks a lot re..
bas koshish hai kahi pohochne ki..manzil toh abhi bhi lapata hai

joiedevivre said...

@ yayaver
dard toh kar kahi hai..gaur se dekho toh har khusi mein aasu hi milte hai..haina

joiedevivre said...

@ saim
even i hope so
lets pray
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ asmi
heavy dose hai kya??
:P

joiedevivre said...

@ pranky
thanks a lott
:)
welcome to blog

joiedevivre said...

@ rakesh
thanks a lot :)

even m a beignner..keep your sense open and mind free
sab samajh aa jayega :D

its about a destination, a path, a walk, a friend in the form of shadow and soo much.

Mayz said...

wah wah wah!!! kya farmaya hai...wah!!!

joiedevivre said...

@ mayz
:D
bohot bohot Dhanyawaad!!

Pranky said...

Thanks Neha..:).

I have read ur maximum posts, and really they stuck us there to read.
You just write simple but straight forward!!!
Good keep it up Neha.

anirudh said...

beautiful!!

digant sutar said...

Beautiful lines...but this time picture is not going with theme.

deluded said...

wow.

is it just me, or are there really multiple meaning to this one??

Pranay said...

Very well written...Beautiful balance between the meaning and the rhyme scheme. :) I feel like writing something too now...


P.S. Haan! haan! padh raha hun mein....:P

joiedevivre said...

@ pranky
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ anirudh
Shukriya!

joiedevivre said...

@ digant
hmm picture dosent go very well with this...i know
:(
is baar nai search kar pai aachese

joiedevivre said...

@ deluded
there are multiple meanings if you can really drag them out.
TRY ON

joiedevivre said...

@ pranay
thank you...bohot dino baad kuch likha yaar..
aur bhi hai coming up..

P.S - Mein chahti hu tu bohot bada aur aacha doctor bane, isliye kehte rehti hu. PADAI KARO.

oo7 said...

waaah waah...

The Pink Orchid said...

zindagi ki galiyon mein,
anjaan chehro ki bheed mein,
socha main tanha hoon,
akeli hoon, udaas hoon,
par thodi roshni aayi,
aur maine dekha,
har gali,
har mehfil,
hur soch,
har udaas aur,
us roshni mein bhi,
mera saya mera sath tha!


you write well.. attempting Hindi poetry is not bad once in a while.:D let me read another post from you.. :D

joiedevivre said...

@ the pink orchid
Thanks a lot

write your one with hindi font you'l feel more beauty while reading :)

joiedevivre said...

@ Vikram
:)
:)

Pooja said...

m not much in2 hindi...but dis 1 was really nice..

DEbajeet said...

hosh mein to hain na tu??

Sarath said...

nahi akela tha mai aaya, mai aur mera humsaaya...

good one. u into hindi literature??

joiedevivre said...

@ pooja
thanks
:D

joiedevivre said...

@ debajeet
haan re poori tarah se hosh mein hu..
kya hua?

joiedevivre said...

@ sarath
ji haan..bas thoda bohot

Resurgence said...

Gal......... good one.... par jaisa ki hamne pehle bhi kaha hai hamein kavitayein samajh me nahi aati hain.... :)

Ek aur cheej poochna tha please explain the meaning behind 'Manzil door kinare aur tinka'.... :)

joiedevivre said...

@ resurgence
is line ka matlab hai -

jab durr se koi kinara dikhta hai toh woh kafi chota dikhai deta hai..ek horizon jaise..lagta hai chote se tinke baraber hai..lekin pass jate hi ehsas hota hai ke rasta abhi bhi baki hai..

Prakhar said...

just brilliant...mujhe yeh do line bahot acchi lagi

सिमटी हाथो की रेखाएं
कहती उसको चलते जाए,

wah..bahot khoob :)

joiedevivre said...

@ prakhar
bohot bohot shukriya :)

chirag said...

that's superb
you write very well in Hindi

check out my blog i also write lot hindi poems

joiedevivre said...

@ chirag
thanks