Thursday, January 15, 2009

chalo chupp jaye

I love being drifted away by life
m hiding from happiness
yeah you see,
we started playing again
with the carried over game...

48 comments:

Aneesh said...

puzzles? or puzzling poem?
:P

peter said...

The title sounded sweet but the elaboration is sad :O
why why why ?

The Solitary Writer. said...

nice....wht it mean

explain last line ..

WarmSunshine said...

lovely :)

how do you manage it in such a cute and *complete* way? I'm amazed :)

Rajesh said...

Wow!!! Lovely

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

khushiyon se bhi dar ?

sab usi ke peeche bhagte hain aur aap us hi se ???

Pranav Kumar V said...

Knock knock...

Who's there??

Its me!!

Who ME??!!

I'm HAPPINESS... :D

So what??

Can I be your friend for life??

Sure!! :) Just walk along...

And they lived HAPPILY EVER AFTER... :D:D:D

Resurgence said...

Gal... Why hiding from Happiness? or is it that in the game of Hide n Seek... Happiness has decided to hide and you for a while have allowed it to remain that way...

For me: we can not hide from happiness until we are one of those rare characters who would point out negative aspects in everything.. :)

Njoy Gal.... Chillax.... :)

Think Tank said...

meri sapnon ki rani kab ayegi tu ..this is not for u

oo7 said...

looks to me as a homeless
poem, wandrin' pages for
straight lines and edges

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

wonderful :)

SMRITI said...

hmmm sounds good...but what exactly was the carried over game??

Aur kahaan hai aajkal???

mayz said...

game set n match wid dat post!!!

Leo said...

joie rocks...!! :)

lovely...!! :)

Sarath said...

too complicated for a buddhu like me..

Urv said...

Aah.. sahi..

Whats the most super part is that u mentioned that m hiding from happiness and not the other way round..

Many a times its upto us to reach out to the happiness around.. hai na..

Amrita~Ams said...

Kyu???? :O

Randeep said...

yeh u better hide.. else it will show u what sadness is.. :)

cheers
Randeep

shooting star said...

puzzling!!......watever it is.....if ur happy with whatever ur feeling then its okay!!!

joiedevivre said...

@ aneesh
naa not at all puzzeled..

joiedevivre said...

@ pinkss
it isnt sad re..it is just the way things are..

joiedevivre said...

@ stephen
hmm i already had given you the explanation...

:)

joiedevivre said...

@ mehreen
thanx dear..
mujhe khud nai pata...bas yahi hai jo hai

joiedevivre said...

@ rajesh
thanx

joiedevivre said...

@ i'l try to be truthful
jab khushiya bohot jyada ho tab unse chupp jana hi aacha hai...it presents you hurt, pain and anger when you dont have it around...

joiedevivre said...

@ pranav
aww so sweet..

joiedevivre said...

@ resurgence
not happiness its me who has decided to hide for a while..i kno i'l be caught very soon

joiedevivre said...

@ farah
hehe
aacha mere liye kaun sa hai
yeh toh bata????

joiedevivre said...

@ vikram
homless??

joiedevivre said...

@ preetilata
:)
thanx

joiedevivre said...

@ smriti
carried over game toh hamara barso se chal ra hai...

aur mein toh yahi hu yaar, where are you?? will catch you online :P

joiedevivre said...

@ mayz
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ vinay
thank you so much

joiedevivre said...

@ sarath
oops!! choory

joiedevivre said...

@ urv
xactly....
it is what i wanted to say here..

joiedevivre said...

@ amrita
kyuki yeh jarrori hai is waqt..
samjhi beta

joiedevivre said...

@ randeep
i kno what sadness is, we all know actully...

joiedevivre said...

@ shooting star
yeah, m absolutly alrite..
:)

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Nice,deep verse! :)

comfortably numb said...

me thnks only v hide from happiness
reason being v knw tht happiness will succumb once it meets the other harsh aspects of our life.

joiedevivre said...

@ samyy
thank..hope you enjoyin weekend

joiedevivre said...

@ saim
finally, i got someone who undestand's this

Lena said...

beautifully penned :)
but why hiding?

joiedevivre said...

@ lena
hmm, to escape agony and pain..
to suffer less

Hemanth Potluri said...

:)..

urs..hemu..

joiedevivre said...

@ hemzz
hey check my mail...somethin important

tinkerbell said...

very cute neha..
amazing depths in all your 4-liners!!
cheers hunnie..

joiedevivre said...

@ isra
thankieee
:D