Monday, December 15, 2008

Few more hours of darkness passed away
some new secrets got locked
just behind the virtual show
there was a life
which they lived as one

48 comments:

DEbajeet said...

are you talking about the couple shown in the pic? if yes, then who are they?? :p

joiedevivre said...

@debajeet
yeah m talkin abt dem here but this could happen with anyone who is fallen in love...
(i dnt kno dem)

Sam said...

And that life was beautiful, surreal and lovely.......

magical words just dont stop coming out of ur mind buddy.....

keep up!!

Hemanth Potluri said...

kya bat hai :)..love is the ting that never unbonds :)...have u fallen in love :P...

urs..hemu..

digant sutar said...

very nice....
But tell me is those moments u lived before or u want to live those moments?

SMRITI said...

That was nicely done :)

"behind the virtual show, there was a life which they lived as one"...

Makes me kinda nostalgic now :P

Trinaa said...

ohhhhhhhhhhh..sexy!

Fiducia said...

Hey, nice and short..good one! it seems like something that can happen to anyone..Is it so?

Fiducia a.k.a Angel

Arjun said...

woah..!! Very nice...
n very true... :)

Cheers..!!
Arjun

WarmSunshine said...

that was beeeeaaauuutiful!

:)

•♥•♥[V]♥•♥• said...

nice description of the pic..
liked it

brought some memories back from my trunk.

tc

mayz said...

wat r v talkin abt here??

Priya Joyce said...

niice post dear...ur four liners juss rock..life juss looks so beautiful in luv

:)

template is cool

Nidhi said...

I don't know who you had in mind while writing this post... but I could relate it to the lead characters,Bella and Edward (vampire) of the novel "Twilight".. by Stephanie Meyer :D

Randeep said...

well I didnt get it fully though it good.. Especially the last three lines.. :)

Cheers
Randeep

Think Tank said...

as one? forever/ good ...v need that ...

lukkydivz said...

kya? kaun? kab? kahan? :D

Dosth said...

kya the woh secrets..?

∂єяαngє∂ ιnѕαnιту ^.^ said...

I dunno for some reason, I could picture My Dad and I behind those backs. May be because we were walking on empty streets last night and Dad was holding me the same way the man holding the girl in this picture. And oh yes, we definitely shared some great secrets as well ;)

Lovely lines though =)

Aneesh said...

new secrets got locked and some might get unlocked..
:)

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

wowww beautiful n so true to life.

loved it :)

joiedevivre said...

@ sam
thanx frnd
hmm yeh imagination wrld is really beutiful..u never feel lik cuming out of it..

joiedevivre said...

@ hemzz
u think m in luv???
hehe
waise is it imp to falll in luv to write about love..?

joiedevivre said...

@ digant
hmm wish to live those

joiedevivre said...

@ smriti
thanx dear

joiedevivre said...

@ tinnii
kaun
mein ya wrds???
:p

joiedevivre said...

@ angel
why not yarr
dere are people who liv in luv, liv wih luv...and keep on addin more n more to it..
sumtimes we kno and sumtimes we dnt kno..

joiedevivre said...

@ arjun
thanx
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ mehreen
:)))))))

joiedevivre said...

@ vikram
hmm..
some things r difficult to forget infact

joiedevivre said...

@ mays
we are talkin abt 2 people,,in love,,living in d world of luv..and dis life is absolutly unknown and invisible for this wrld..

joiedevivre said...

@ pj
thank u soo much frnd..
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ nidhi
i had some gud feelin..happiness deep inside..
just a thought!!!

joiedevivre said...

@ randeep
hehe
was it dat difficult??

it says
dey lived as one, madly in love with each other, carefree..n dere wrld of happiness in hidden behind the life in which they live.

joiedevivre said...

@ thinkin tanki
yeahh
wher r u??
gayab rehti hai hamesha??

joiedevivre said...

@ divu dii
hehe
koi bhi..kabhi bhi..kaahi bhi..can fall in luv..

joiedevivre said...

@ dosth
hw wud i kno..??
ask them..
:P

joiedevivre said...

@ deranged insanity
sabse pehle,gud to see u here..
hope ur fine wid evrythin goin..

yeah dis is another nice conclusion of lines..another form of love..eternal!!
:)

joiedevivre said...

@ aneesh
exactly!!

joiedevivre said...

@ preetilata
thanx
:)

Pranav Kumar V said...

hmmm... I read those five lines thrice and deciphered them three different ways!! Now that's something!!

See you when I see you... :)

joiedevivre said...

@ pranav
ohh really??
wat were ur 3 different conclusions
wud like to kno yaar..

Pranay said...

I know dat phase...you two live a love in secret. Hidden from d world.
Nicely written.
Am not really posting anything at d moment...dont feel like.
tk cr..

joiedevivre said...

@ pranay
thank u
hope to see ur wrds..
:)

The Solitary Writer. said...

short and sweet neha

so whtsup these days

joiedevivre said...

@ ste
thanx :)

wats up?? milke batati hu..

Siddharth said...

hello neha

well u know what i have read it many times and telling u honesty

in munnabhai style
"bole to apne bheje main kuch ja nahi raha hai"

u really had became an intellectual.

good work keep doing....

joiedevivre said...

@ siddharth
hehe koi baat nai
kabhi fursat mein samjha dungi
:)