Quite random and yet intense! A thought crossing a troubled mind dwelling in fate and being released to face peace.. Beautiful!! Keep writing..:) Following ur blog!
सुई में धागा आज पिरोया कमरे की बत्ती में फिर मन खोया,
एक दृश्य जिसके पीछे हम जाते हैं एक दृश्य जिसमे सोते रह जाते हैं एक जहाँ श्रम मूल्यवान शुभ वर्धक है किन्तु स्वप्न का श्रम सुख सभी निरर्थक है एक प्रकाशित करता है पुरुषार्थ हमारा एक जागरण होते ही खो जाता सारा
मन ही देवता मन ही ईश्वर मन से बडा न कोय
मन को पंख लगे छू आया तुरत फुरत आकाश इतना व्यस्त,,नहीं रहता है इसे तनिक अवकाश
इसके बिना नहीं चल सकते एक कदम भी आप अच्छा है आजाद कर लिया ,लो अब दुनिया माप
Gal... good to see u back in form with the Hindi poem... as always kuch jyada samajh me nahi aaya... but ek question hai.... kya 'Ek bandhan'ki jagah 'Kuch bandhan' nahi hoga?
great lines.....i m leaving home for studies and in new city i'll be feeling nostalgic.....in those times...i'll be rhyming ur lines.......(if u permit without copyright) ...... :)
49 comments:
Depressing ???
ahem-ahem!!
kya baat hai...
kaviyatri Neha saheeba..
hum toh aapke fan ho gaye..
Sounds like sonnet and gives the glimpse of passing time...
lovely!
jaa ladki.. if i cud read hindi i wud have been the Queen of Indore.... :(
-D Rat
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sach?? mera case toh ultaa hai!! Good one anyway... :D
See you when I see you... :D
very nicely written..!! poem was rocking..after many months read a hindi poem
yaadein kabhi azaadi to kabhi bahandhan ban jaate hai
.Great 4 liner..
Quite random and yet intense!
A thought crossing a troubled mind dwelling in fate and being released to face peace..
Beautiful!!
Keep writing..:) Following ur blog!
once again u r successful in speaking much more with few words!!!
बहुत अच्छी रचना है
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तख़लीक़-ए-नज़र
nice...
subhanAllah!!!
"कोने में कुछ पड़े थे बक्से,
उन्हें खोल कर मन को आजाद कराया|"
corner of heart :)
सुई में धागा आज पिरोया
कमरे की बत्ती में फिर मन खोया,
एक दृश्य जिसके पीछे हम जाते हैं
एक दृश्य जिसमे सोते रह जाते हैं
एक जहाँ श्रम मूल्यवान शुभ वर्धक है
किन्तु स्वप्न का श्रम सुख सभी निरर्थक है
एक प्रकाशित करता है पुरुषार्थ हमारा
एक जागरण होते ही खो जाता सारा
मन ही देवता
मन ही ईश्वर
मन से बडा न कोय
मन को पंख लगे छू आया तुरत फुरत आकाश
इतना व्यस्त,,नहीं रहता है इसे तनिक अवकाश
इसके बिना नहीं चल सकते एक कदम भी आप
अच्छा है आजाद कर लिया ,लो अब दुनिया माप
बहुत प्रभावशाली अभिव्यक्ति
@ hobo
not at all
@ ankita
:)
dhanyawaad!!!
@ yayaver
exactly,
the memories lost in the time...
@ pooja
thanks
@ the rat
hehe..maaf karo..pata nahi tha mujhe yaarr..
voted for you :)
@ pranav
case ulta matlab..tumhe beete din yaad nai aate ????
@ prajyot
thanks a lott..
@ vigneshwar
4 nai 6 lines :P
thanks anyway.
@ fiducia
some lines says it all..unexpressed..unexplained
right..
@ saim
:)
@ vinay
thanks a lot
@ knatchbulley
here after long time.
thanks :)
@ i'l try to be truthful
haan woh bhi..
@ gaafil
khoob hai..
mein shayad kuch aur kehna chahti hu aapni kavita mein..
beautifully written...you could be the female gulzar!!
@ sajal
thanks
seriously you should go into writing lyrics for films... much better than the inane lyrics going on nowadays...
yar..mazze aa gaye neha...
mast ekdum...
hope teri next post french mai ho :P
memories good or bad ,can take you places...
nice jalebi nice.
tc
wah wah! kya baat kahi :)
@ toon india
aare nai bhai
yeh toh kuch bhi nai hai..
gulzar ka koi match nai hai :)
thanks anyway
@ sarath
films ka toh pata nahi abhi ke liye toh blog hi theek hai. :)
@ asmi
It would take long to write in French.
@ vicky
exactly, we jus get carried away
@ as
:)
thanks, aur haan m not writing under influence of any BIHARI..ha ha ha
Gal... good to see u back in form with the Hindi poem... as always kuch jyada samajh me nahi aaya... but ek question hai.... kya 'Ek bandhan'ki jagah 'Kuch bandhan' nahi hoga?
Sundar.........
@ resurgence
:) good to see you here as well.
ek hi hai jiski baat ho rahi hai yaha..one bandhan, jus one..
@ digant
dhanyawaad!!!
wow!!
amazing
p.s was just passing by
aaj fir aankho main aansu hain
aaj fir labo par ek naam hain
aaj fir vahi sham hain
aaj fir aya unka paigam hain...
this lines from my side hopw u don't mind
translation, please? :)
great lines.....i m leaving home for studies and in new city i'll be feeling nostalgic.....in those times...i'll be rhyming ur lines.......(if u permit without copyright) ...... :)
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