एक रात के साये में
थोड़ी से परछाई में,
खोज रहा था ख़ुद को वो
मांग रहा था जीवन वो,
खुली आँखों में था वो सपना
मंजिल दूर किनारे और तिनका,
सिमटी हाथो की रेखाएं
कहती उसको चलते जाए,
नहीं अकेला था में आया
में और मेरा हमसाया..
थोड़ी से परछाई में,
खोज रहा था ख़ुद को वो
मांग रहा था जीवन वो,
खुली आँखों में था वो सपना
मंजिल दूर किनारे और तिनका,
सिमटी हाथो की रेखाएं
कहती उसको चलते जाए,
नहीं अकेला था में आया
में और मेरा हमसाया..
56 comments:
MAdam yeh hindi wale post samjh nahi atey aapkey ..mujhey angreezi mein iska anuwad chaiye :P
mere palleh to nai padi :((
wow!! i needed tuition for hindi, n they're talented ones like you, who can write poetry in hindi, n that too so well..!! i got most of it, but whose the humsaaya supposed to be ??
meri hindi tho poor hai :(....
but good abt u and ur :)
urs..hemu..
Me can't understand :(
Thats ME.
:)
welcome back mate :)
i was waiting since very long time for this post , and the wait is over now
nic post.....the fight against inner black !!
SUYOG
its so beautiful neha..
btw kaha jane ka irada hai madam :-D??
I did not get the end...though i u'stand hindi very well..!
nevertheless,lovely work re :-)
बहुत सुंदर कविता है पर कहीं दर्द दबा हुआ लगता है...खुद को खोजती हुए ज़िंदगी जेसे..
n the journey continues...may u reach the destination too but I guess even the road together is pure bliss:)
billo rani...:D :D...
after a long tym...
I again read ur post thrice to get that :P
Wow!!! Great........ bahut sahi likha...
Zindagi ki kuch unsuljhi baatain...
Very cute... I mean your new pic :)
And ya, very interesting poem as well :) but needs a lil explaining for novices like us.
I mean, does it mean that a person shouldn't loose hope and work towards his dreams because he doesn't ever walk alone. His shadow is at least always with him...
@ pinku
hindi hamari matrabhasha hai pinkude...itna toh easy hai..
anuwad nahi ho sakega yaar uska feel chala jayega
@ pisku
kyu yarr??
you were not able to link in between the lines
@ isra
m really glad if you think so..have just started writing in hindi sometime back..
abhi toh bohot kuch seekhna hai, yeh toh abs shruat hai..
it will be my pleasure to help you with any kind of writing
:D
@ hemzi
i kno ur hindi is poor..will try to translate it okie
@ mehreen
oops!
:P
@ hobo
thats even better
:D
@ sam
thank you soo much sam
:)
@ suyog
Thank you, i had been away from blog for sometime..i feels great to be back
@ ankita
thanks a lot re..
bas koshish hai kahi pohochne ki..manzil toh abhi bhi lapata hai
@ yayaver
dard toh kar kahi hai..gaur se dekho toh har khusi mein aasu hi milte hai..haina
@ saim
even i hope so
lets pray
:)
@ asmi
heavy dose hai kya??
:P
@ pranky
thanks a lott
:)
welcome to blog
@ rakesh
thanks a lot :)
even m a beignner..keep your sense open and mind free
sab samajh aa jayega :D
its about a destination, a path, a walk, a friend in the form of shadow and soo much.
wah wah wah!!! kya farmaya hai...wah!!!
@ mayz
:D
bohot bohot Dhanyawaad!!
Thanks Neha..:).
I have read ur maximum posts, and really they stuck us there to read.
You just write simple but straight forward!!!
Good keep it up Neha.
beautiful!!
Beautiful lines...but this time picture is not going with theme.
wow.
is it just me, or are there really multiple meaning to this one??
Very well written...Beautiful balance between the meaning and the rhyme scheme. :) I feel like writing something too now...
P.S. Haan! haan! padh raha hun mein....:P
@ pranky
:)
@ anirudh
Shukriya!
@ digant
hmm picture dosent go very well with this...i know
:(
is baar nai search kar pai aachese
@ deluded
there are multiple meanings if you can really drag them out.
TRY ON
@ pranay
thank you...bohot dino baad kuch likha yaar..
aur bhi hai coming up..
P.S - Mein chahti hu tu bohot bada aur aacha doctor bane, isliye kehte rehti hu. PADAI KARO.
waaah waah...
zindagi ki galiyon mein,
anjaan chehro ki bheed mein,
socha main tanha hoon,
akeli hoon, udaas hoon,
par thodi roshni aayi,
aur maine dekha,
har gali,
har mehfil,
hur soch,
har udaas aur,
us roshni mein bhi,
mera saya mera sath tha!
you write well.. attempting Hindi poetry is not bad once in a while.:D let me read another post from you.. :D
@ the pink orchid
Thanks a lot
write your one with hindi font you'l feel more beauty while reading :)
@ Vikram
:)
:)
m not much in2 hindi...but dis 1 was really nice..
hosh mein to hain na tu??
nahi akela tha mai aaya, mai aur mera humsaaya...
good one. u into hindi literature??
@ pooja
thanks
:D
@ debajeet
haan re poori tarah se hosh mein hu..
kya hua?
@ sarath
ji haan..bas thoda bohot
Gal......... good one.... par jaisa ki hamne pehle bhi kaha hai hamein kavitayein samajh me nahi aati hain.... :)
Ek aur cheej poochna tha please explain the meaning behind 'Manzil door kinare aur tinka'.... :)
@ resurgence
is line ka matlab hai -
jab durr se koi kinara dikhta hai toh woh kafi chota dikhai deta hai..ek horizon jaise..lagta hai chote se tinke baraber hai..lekin pass jate hi ehsas hota hai ke rasta abhi bhi baki hai..
just brilliant...mujhe yeh do line bahot acchi lagi
सिमटी हाथो की रेखाएं
कहती उसको चलते जाए,
wah..bahot khoob :)
@ prakhar
bohot bohot shukriya :)
that's superb
you write very well in Hindi
check out my blog i also write lot hindi poems
@ chirag
thanks
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