they were going through a beautiful struggle kissing silently each other on invisible mode relocating the exchange of feeling deep inside those dreams...
yes i got this one ! and it's nice but can you bring variety to ur posts plzzzz !! I am trying to remember the last time you had a post about something other than ..uploading pics and write 3-4 liners..!
they were going through a beautiful struggle
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@ hobo
now what
dont tell me...u didnt get this one too..
you use good metaphors in your poetry, makes people think.. this one is really beautiful :)
yes i got this one !
and it's nice
but can you bring variety to ur posts plzzzz !!
I am trying to remember the last time you had a post about something other than ..uploading pics and write 3-4 liners..!
kuch aur try kar be X-(
Beautiful!!!! Though it is not a Haiku......the essence of the poem is there
Tuition timings please... time set karte hain :( plzzzzz :(
Bata de date aur time..main aa jaungi.... :(
oye whr do u get these awesome pix from???
Someone seems to be falling in love :P:P
@ lena
just something out of imagination it is.. :)
thank you
@ pinku
variety??
thats the way i write..
will try something else too.
@ maddy
it never was intended to be taken as Haiku..
just a momentary expression in few lines..
:D
@ smriti
aaree bilkul..
isi bahane tujhe milna ho jayega..
tu toh maharani hai..milti hi nai
maha busy
@ tinni
shtyle hai babeh...
:P
@ pj
fallin bole toh giri hui
:P
beautiful struggle. invisible mode! wowwwww beautiful and romantic. :)
precise and beautifully expressed..
next time arnd,give a link to wer u get these pics from..Btw,is that U and HIM??? :p
take care dearie.. :)
Nikhil
hmmm...
jaise jaise kahani aage bad rahi hai
creativity bhi aage badh rahi hai!
achha hai :)
cool one :)
beautiful... how romantic
sweet... very very sweet :)
@ preeti
full of love.
:D
@ raka
and m sooo happy to see you again
@ nikhil
hehe
this is not me and HIM :P
@ digant
abhi picture baki hai mere dost
@ abhishek
and i thought this is HOT :P
@ anirudh
:D
:D
:D
:D
@ mehreen
oopsss m gettin daibetic
this is the struggle ............that can be enjoyed and relished !!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol joie ki bacchi aaj kal bade pj's crack karne lagi hei? :P
tat's ma job
samjhii???
Whoa!! Invisible mode and dreams?? Now THATs something :D
Sounds great though!! OK. STOP THINKING PK!! :P
See you when I see you... :)
@ suyog
yeah..who would deny that
@ pj
hehe..ok ok you are the master.
@ pranav
no body will charge you for dreaming.. :P
chalne do!!
I didnt understood the theme.. mebbe cuz i visited these for the first time.. but the feelings really made the point clear.. its touchy !!
"Drink with me only with thine eyes..
And i will pledge with mine.
Or leave a kiss but in the cup..
And I will not drink for the wine."
..wrote once a famous poet.
i think that if we look into our dreams we see the real working of the soul..
these dreams are certainly worth looking into...
Gud luck..my girl..!!
have been away - read the kuch kuches from before
this journey seems to make you more and more creative :)
@ big omi
thanks for dropping
@ dosth
kaash mein bhi aise likh pau
luck ka good hona bohot jarrori hai
:D
@ ceedy
kuch kuches..i like that
thanks!!
lets see how far they go
:) is someone falling in love ;)
@ nidhi
:) samajh jao
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