u knw wat neha... i have realised -i have started understanding the beauty of your four liners...n this one is no exception -gal...aint u getting a bit philosophical each passing day? growing up? huh? or already grown...? -n how do u manage those apt pics...that is something really commendable..
n for this one...true its so difficult to live a artificial life......
No no no... let me understand first... does it mean what it means?? Or could it mean what we want it to mean?? Though its always what we want it to mean...
These are 'khushi ke aasoon' we're talking of here, right?? Because that's what my mind is bent towards understanding... See, being a man, people always try to find you in that ONE situation where you're crying... I do that always, out of joy, or I'm too sleepy and yawn too much... so the idiots think I cry (not that I really care!!) but it makes me wet wet wet!! So, I try to avoid!!
@above I think d eyes becum wet coz of the forced nature of the smile. @post beautifully put...though do tell me whether I understood correct or not!!!
Beautiful... I thought about it and I guess it has a dual effect for me...Tears of Joy and Smile when in Pain. Either ways, they are such contrasting expressions...yet...
Gal.... this post got me confused... actually it can be interpreted in both the ways (If that's the beauty of the post).... but it is easy to refer it to sadness but at the same time one encounters the same when one laughs one's heart out too.... :)
Try one more thing "Don't try too hard" Cos ur talking about intensity and that comes directly from inside,so that means ur trying to be,wat ur not.And this is not good for a creative person....:) Anyways Beautiful lines...
@ amrita hehe..not actully..sai mein nai roi yaar..just dailog maara.. chinta nai..chahe kuch bhi ho...xam ke 1 hr pehle hi kitab uthate hai hum.. :D see my jhakas smile
smiling while crying within....i have had those times.... those times when my pain was so much that looking at another person's happiness was unbearable...i can so recognize the thoughts behind those lines!!!!
Tears of Happiness and Artificial Smile... Hmm.. Nice Concept..!! She cant laugh further so she has put this smiling page in front of her...!! Cool!! Nice!! I like it.. Hope my dumb mind understood this :) and if its saying something else pls do tell!! :) Have a nice day...!
this is my first visit to ur blog, liked it..very thoughtful... and I loved the design and layout too much esp the diary with coffee mug :) keep writing.. such lines reflect the reality of life :)
"trying to slow down
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u knw wat neha...
i have realised
-i have started understanding the beauty of your four liners...n this one is no exception
-gal...aint u getting a bit philosophical each passing day? growing up? huh? or already grown...?
-n how do u manage those apt pics...that is something really commendable..
n for this one...true its so difficult to live a artificial life......
No no no... let me understand first... does it mean what it means?? Or could it mean what we want it to mean?? Though its always what we want it to mean...
These are 'khushi ke aasoon' we're talking of here, right?? Because that's what my mind is bent towards understanding... See, being a man, people always try to find you in that ONE situation where you're crying... I do that always, out of joy, or I'm too sleepy and yawn too much... so the idiots think I cry (not that I really care!!) but it makes me wet wet wet!! So, I try to avoid!!
Go ahead... your version...
See you when I see you... :)
did i forsee valentine day coming up so so many smiles :)
@above
I think d eyes becum wet coz of the forced nature of the smile.
@post
beautifully put...though do tell me whether I understood correct or not!!!
dont try to smile to much...:P...i am not joking...its good way ...but i am confused if its...wat i think :P..
urs..hemu..
just be
dont try too hard
ull be fine :)
Isnt it a irony....that when you laugh with all your heart...you have tears..
this is beautifully penned..and if I understand it...its meant to have a dual meaning
this is a beautiful blog!!! :)
Beautiful... I thought about it and I guess it has a dual effect for me...Tears of Joy and Smile when in Pain. Either ways, they are such contrasting expressions...yet...
Nicely done :)
i can relate to that you know
short lines that say a lot
lovely as always :)
oye..beutifully pen down ..
but tussi fine ho na???
ye rona shona kyu??
beautiful- your four liner's are amazing!!!
Keep smiling- its good to be burdened with smile
well i didnt get it..Anyway keep smiling... nothing to lose by smiling..
Cheers
Randeep
joie is a four line wonder! she manages to get the beauty in so less words... amazes me every time!
wowie joie!
it's quite apt and obvious if u dun read between the lines..!!
but since poems dun have any boundaries.. i see so much in it :D
gud wrk be ;)
mmm... no comments!
all'll be fine re
:)
y???
isssmmiillleeee na, yaar :)
Plastic smile melting down...
Gal.... this post got me confused... actually it can be interpreted in both the ways (If that's the beauty of the post).... but it is easy to refer it to sadness but at the same time one encounters the same when one laughs one's heart out too.... :)
Try one more thing "Don't try too hard"
Cos ur talking about intensity and that comes directly from inside,so that means ur trying to be,wat ur not.And this is not good for a creative person....:)
Anyways Beautiful lines...
y have i started seeing so much pain in ur recent posts??
khushi ke aansu hai kya? xD
ok bad joke but very intelligent lines...
Scribblers Inc.
hmmmm.....:)
@ niki mam
hmm shayad i have grown up..
pics toh search karte karte mil jate hai... :D
@ pranav
it says two things -
one is ofcourse khushi ke aasoon and other is the artificial smile ..
@ sam
nope it has nothing to do with valentines day :P
@ saim
poems are such beautiful things..
you can percieve them as per your imagination and understanding
:)
@ hemzz
jyada mat soch..
njoy the wedding
@ aditi
m absolutly fine..
..some thoughts..dats it
@ ceedy
it actually is a irony of life
u got it right
:)
@ ani
thanks :D
@ smriti
:)
:)
:)
:)
@ mehreen
thanks dear
:)
@ amrita
haan re mein theek hu..
haan ro rai hu not bcoz of khushi bcoz of xamzz..yeh xam itne jaldi jaldi kyu aa jate hai
:X
@ roo ba roo
*its good to be burdened with smile
...sometimes
@ randeep
thats alrite
:))
@ vinay
thank you sooooo much
:D
@ pinku
sahi kaha pinkude..
:D
@ g-joe
hehe..great
@ pj
hmm..
m missin you yaar
@ archana
lo kar diya isssmmilleee yaar
:))))))))))))
@ hobo
hmm..removal of fabrication
@ resurgence
yeah the lines are dual in meaning..makes sense..right?
@ digant
hmm you said right..
but it isnt about about me..some thoughts in the mind set.
@ mayz
hmm..
i dont know, just writing my heart and mind
@ scribblers
hehe. yeah it is a bad joke..nyways it still got some smile..
thank you!
@ aditi
hehe you commented like you name
......:)
ooolalalal...
xms k liye royi bacchi....tujse xpected nahi tha waise :|....xms toh avai hai re..chod. show ur teeths or jhakas smile kar :D :D
every short poem of urs is getting better n better with time...lovely...makes us think :) :)
P.S: Visit ma blog soon...u hav something unexpected waiting :)
Why the tears??? Smile hamesha..
@ amrita
hehe..not actully..sai mein nai roi yaar..just dailog maara..
chinta nai..chahe kuch bhi ho...xam ke 1 hr pehle hi kitab uthate hai hum..
:D
see my jhakas smile
@ rajesh
thanksss
..unecpected..maine dekh liya hai..u met with shreya...
:)
@ sarath
hmm
hota hai kabhi kabhi aisa bhi
:(
b'ful!!!
absolutly b'ful!!!
smiling while crying within....i have had those times....
those times when my pain was so much that looking at another person's happiness was unbearable...i can so recognize the thoughts behind those lines!!!!
aap sad ho ji??? dont be sad just be dad or better be mad ( sorry for the lameness)
neha hans de hans de ,hans de tu zara , nahi to bas thoda thoda , thoda muskura :)
@ anirud
aarey tu kahe sad ho gaya
@ pooja
:)
:)))
@ shooting star
hmm..i went through the same
@ i'l try to be truthful
hehe
*better be mad*
i liked it
:D
hass diya maine
Tears of Happiness and Artificial Smile... Hmm.. Nice Concept..!! She cant laugh further so she has put this smiling page in front of her...!! Cool!! Nice!! I like it.. Hope my dumb mind understood this :) and if its saying something else pls do tell!! :) Have a nice day...!
well u know u are sounding the same as govinda of partner.....
u know itni khushi, itni khushi, itni khushi..... and then he cries...
i'll take it in this way. i don't know whether i got it or not....
par mere bhege main to yehi ja raha hai [:)]
yaar jyada philosophical mat ho bouncer ho jati hai....
keep smiling and keep rocking,
sid....
@ sid
hehe
baap re
neha = govinda (thoughts)
kaise baat kar ra hai yaarrr
aur haan tune bilkil galat interpret kiya hai.. :(
koi nai
jann de
hii
this is my first visit to ur blog, liked it..very thoughtful... and I loved the design and layout too much esp the diary with coffee mug :)
keep writing.. such lines reflect the reality of life :)
AS
http://hummingwords.blogspot.com/
@ garima
thank u so much
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