Thursday, January 15, 2009

chalo chupp jaye

I love being drifted away by life
m hiding from happiness
yeah you see,
we started playing again
with the carried over game...

48 comments:

Aneesh said...

puzzles? or puzzling poem?
:P

peter said...

The title sounded sweet but the elaboration is sad :O
why why why ?

The Solitary Writer said...

nice....wht it mean

explain last line ..

WarmSunshine said...

lovely :)

how do you manage it in such a cute and *complete* way? I'm amazed :)

Rajesh said...

Wow!!! Lovely

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

khushiyon se bhi dar ?

sab usi ke peeche bhagte hain aur aap us hi se ???

Pranav Kumar V said...

Knock knock...

Who's there??

Its me!!

Who ME??!!

I'm HAPPINESS... :D

So what??

Can I be your friend for life??

Sure!! :) Just walk along...

And they lived HAPPILY EVER AFTER... :D:D:D

Resurgence said...

Gal... Why hiding from Happiness? or is it that in the game of Hide n Seek... Happiness has decided to hide and you for a while have allowed it to remain that way...

For me: we can not hide from happiness until we are one of those rare characters who would point out negative aspects in everything.. :)

Njoy Gal.... Chillax.... :)

Think Tank said...

meri sapnon ki rani kab ayegi tu ..this is not for u

rainboy said...

looks to me as a homeless
poem, wandrin' pages for
straight lines and edges

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

wonderful :)

SMRITI said...

hmmm sounds good...but what exactly was the carried over game??

Aur kahaan hai aajkal???

Lucifer said...

game set n match wid dat post!!!

Anonymous said...

joie rocks...!! :)

lovely...!! :)

Sarath said...

too complicated for a buddhu like me..

Urv said...

Aah.. sahi..

Whats the most super part is that u mentioned that m hiding from happiness and not the other way round..

Many a times its upto us to reach out to the happiness around.. hai na..

Amrita~Ams said...

Kyu???? :O

Randeep said...

yeh u better hide.. else it will show u what sadness is.. :)

cheers
Randeep

My Unfinished Life said...

puzzling!!......watever it is.....if ur happy with whatever ur feeling then its okay!!!

joie de vivre said...

@ aneesh
naa not at all puzzeled..

joie de vivre said...

@ pinkss
it isnt sad re..it is just the way things are..

joie de vivre said...

@ stephen
hmm i already had given you the explanation...

:)

joie de vivre said...

@ mehreen
thanx dear..
mujhe khud nai pata...bas yahi hai jo hai

joie de vivre said...

@ rajesh
thanx

joie de vivre said...

@ i'l try to be truthful
jab khushiya bohot jyada ho tab unse chupp jana hi aacha hai...it presents you hurt, pain and anger when you dont have it around...

joie de vivre said...

@ pranav
aww so sweet..

joie de vivre said...

@ resurgence
not happiness its me who has decided to hide for a while..i kno i'l be caught very soon

joie de vivre said...

@ farah
hehe
aacha mere liye kaun sa hai
yeh toh bata????

joie de vivre said...

@ vikram
homless??

joie de vivre said...

@ preetilata
:)
thanx

joie de vivre said...

@ smriti
carried over game toh hamara barso se chal ra hai...

aur mein toh yahi hu yaar, where are you?? will catch you online :P

joie de vivre said...

@ mayz
:)

joie de vivre said...

@ vinay
thank you so much

joie de vivre said...

@ sarath
oops!! choory

joie de vivre said...

@ urv
xactly....
it is what i wanted to say here..

joie de vivre said...

@ amrita
kyuki yeh jarrori hai is waqt..
samjhi beta

joie de vivre said...

@ randeep
i kno what sadness is, we all know actully...

joie de vivre said...

@ shooting star
yeah, m absolutly alrite..
:)

Sameera Ansari said...

Nice,deep verse! :)

Saim said...

me thnks only v hide from happiness
reason being v knw tht happiness will succumb once it meets the other harsh aspects of our life.

joie de vivre said...

@ samyy
thank..hope you enjoyin weekend

joie de vivre said...

@ saim
finally, i got someone who undestand's this

Lena said...

beautifully penned :)
but why hiding?

joie de vivre said...

@ lena
hmm, to escape agony and pain..
to suffer less

Hemanth Potluri said...

:)..

urs..hemu..

joie de vivre said...

@ hemzz
hey check my mail...somethin important

tinkerbell said...

very cute neha..
amazing depths in all your 4-liners!!
cheers hunnie..

joie de vivre said...

@ isra
thankieee
:D