Half filled eyesstaring neon hoarding
glowing steady flames
generating mild madness
twisting forces in and out
mellowed minute moments
looking around to be wise
getting the measure
to look after incisive jiggle
crippling the regards
unable to find to him!
46 comments:
Love ....u can find the person in a room of darkness wer even it is filled with total darkness..if the love towards the person is true ..u can hear the heart beat and aprroach him....
Good Post...
PS: do i look like uncle wahhh :'( i am crying now hahaha lol...
@ hemanth
no yarr it dosent mean dat
it actully defines the moment when the girl is waitin for her lover..
i understood that but wanted to give a diffrent discription of love...the diffrent view of love...
ur english accent is soo cool i have to go to dictionay.com to find the meaning for some words...
lol...but the post is too cool..may be one day if i had lover she wud be waiting for me too..
urs..hemu..
hmmm... waiting for someone can seem like an eternity.. nice lines :) heyy.. u look like this collegue of mine.. "Ann"... if thats u!
hey buddy I don't have such an experience. wen I have 1 then I'll be commenting on it after graduating in "Intezaar".
oooh!!!
Yet another indigestible one :)
@ hemanth
hogi uncleji koi toh ladki hogi..dnt wry
haha
abt diificult words...i want to reach the emotion proplerly
and dese r d xact wrds...
very percise!
@ arun pk
nop m not ann..
m joie
anyways thanx
@ priya
beta m also not xperienced...i was just tryin to xplore dat feelin..i dnt kno hw much m correct
"we need sum xperienced people here"
:)
@ aneesh
haha..sory yaar
dats d way i write...i cant help it
thoda try toh kar samajh aa jayega...haha
oooh well explored. maan gaye.
I came across these beautiful words by Herbert Shipman in my friend's blog's comment section:
"Across the gateway of my heart
I wrote 'No thorough-fare'
But LOVE came laughing by and cried,
'I enter everywhere!'"
Love! You can't keep yourself away from it :)
I wonder why do I keep hiting it (The topic, not love :P) again and again!
@ priya
thank u pj...will keep xplorin more n more
@ deranged insanity
very nice lines!!
liked it a lot.
yaar collg mein aane ke baad saare bade romantic ho jaate hain. wat say
waiting for the right moment make the kill???
:D
**unable to find to him!
did u look in ur heart??
@ priya
hmm haan shayad..
@ devil
no yaarr..
nothin lik rite moment..
@ mayz
it has nothin to do wid my life
dey r jst few lines..to xplore d moments while waitin
It seems Im waiting forever! :)
Keshi.
@ jojedevivre
frankly speaking it took me 5 mins to understand what u actually meant...
True love is really hard to find,but once found,its really HAPPINESS...!!
well atcually in real world na..there are very few people who actually care for love..!!
But finding true love is real treat of happiness..!!
holy s*** ur again callin me that i surely will die with that feelin yaar...
urs..hemu..
the emotions are the same everywhere but expressions are wonderful....
@ keshi
ders sum kind of pleasure in waitin!!
:)
@ prajyot
hmm..agreed..
really hard to find!!
aur 5 min mein samajh aa gai.. gud..but likhne mein bohot time laga mujhe...haha
@ hemanth
haha..sory yaar
m kiddin..
@ amol
thanx
:)
LOL, Yah I will
have u seen ma latest post on experiences its fun.
b'ful!
I believe this is what love is about. Even that wait has some essence to it...
@ sach
yeah!
:)
Such moments are painful and make one so listless.But the joyful reunion is worth the wait! :)
@ samy
true!! can never ever evaluvate dat joy..
Nice one...
here's a slightly similar version that long long back I had written, not the same words.. but its fits in well so used some of urs...
Blood filled eyes
searching frantically
a heart consumed by flames
a maddening rage
losing senses in and out
sinking moments after moments
looking around for the end
surrendered to the carnage
to look for a sweet release
crippled and burnt
unable to find me!
@ iceman
another beautiful form...
"defined wait" i guess
:)
Just one word-
Spelendindly splendid (oops.two words )
@ aayushi
thanx
:)
Ahem! Ahem!!
Unofficially official first comment on your blog, my dear...
Silently, yet beautifully captured emotions... Beauty of those moments at its best!
Keep writing :))
Short and Crisp. It makes a lot of sense too. I like!
Cheers!!
@ aj
no formalities yaar!!
nice to see ur comment..thank u !
:)
@ comfortably numb
thanx...n CHEERS!!
thoughtful :)
BTW do you hail from the heart of the country ?
aah yes...in the middle of a bustling market on a sunday evening...is when u can stand in the middle of the road and observe each person who goes by very closely without the fear of neone ever noticing u...maybe somewhere in the maddening crowd is a face we have been looking for...
@ buzzz
yeah i do..
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