tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post4630116637946336941..comments2023-05-19T07:18:56.342-07:00Comments on Layering Life: बूंदjoie de vivrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-7770146929067563222009-02-15T08:15:00.000-08:002009-02-15T08:15:00.000-08:00@ sidhaan badi vidambana haiaapni matrabhasha hai ...@ sid<BR/>haan badi vidambana hai<BR/>aapni matrabhasha hai hindi sochjoie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-82188844482605779752009-02-14T07:07:00.000-08:002009-02-14T07:07:00.000-08:00may be ho sakta hai....par apna to jaise hindi se ...may be ho sakta hai....<BR/><BR/>par apna to jaise hindi se nata hi toot gaya hoon.....<BR/><BR/>aajkal to newspaper bhi angrazi hi padhte hai....Siddharthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07376220025691480179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-58169595616730173192009-02-13T08:44:00.000-08:002009-02-13T08:44:00.000-08:00@ sidpata hai hindi likhne ka alag hi feel hai yaa...@ sid<BR/>pata hai hindi likhne ka alag hi feel hai yaar<BR/>hindi literature aur writings bohot hi valuable hai yaarrjoie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-66633714202844539812009-02-13T08:42:00.000-08:002009-02-13T08:42:00.000-08:00@ smritipata nai kaisa likhti hu..bas ho jata hai:...@ smriti<BR/>pata nai kaisa likhti hu..bas ho jata hai<BR/>:)joie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-7474705781510774982009-02-13T08:40:00.000-08:002009-02-13T08:40:00.000-08:00@ resurgence*smiling*thankks@ resurgence<BR/>*smiling*<BR/>thankksjoie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-73291986049150801522009-02-13T07:57:00.000-08:002009-02-13T07:57:00.000-08:00nice pic ....u know after so much days i again get...nice pic ....<BR/><BR/>u know after so much days i again get in touch with kind of hardcore hindi.... and i really feel good to see some original work from a creative friend....<BR/><BR/>keep smiling and keep rocking,<BR/>sid....Siddharthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07376220025691480179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-58108187179318911192009-02-11T15:42:00.000-08:002009-02-11T15:42:00.000-08:00Yeh badhiya hai.... Nicely done. Kaise likhti hai ...Yeh badhiya hai.... Nicely done. Kaise likhti hai re yeh sab?? Sahi hai ekdum :) :)SMRITIhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16358922626954236385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-47317556076532636222009-02-11T12:28:00.000-08:002009-02-11T12:28:00.000-08:00Gal.... This reminded me of a story I read way bac...Gal.... This reminded me of a story I read way back in my text book. It was named 'Rampur ki Agamjani'(If I still remember it correctly)... very nice piece of work... the important thing is that u have highlighted idea behind it well... :)Resurgencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09233711480610976394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-4973895314316607202009-02-11T05:16:00.000-08:002009-02-11T05:16:00.000-08:00@ shashanknow this is very nice to see some critic...@ shashank<BR/>now this is very nice to see some critics..this is gona help me to improve<BR/>will be wrking on it againjoie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-86753137775510135132009-02-11T05:08:00.000-08:002009-02-11T05:08:00.000-08:00@ cursedaww thanku soo much..@ cursed<BR/>aww thanku soo much..joie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-64870829363673695022009-02-11T05:07:00.000-08:002009-02-11T05:07:00.000-08:00@ digantthank you..trying my hands on hindi nowada...@ digant<BR/>thank you..trying my hands on hindi nowadaysjoie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-18277294062019206082009-02-11T05:06:00.000-08:002009-02-11T05:06:00.000-08:00@ i'l try to be truthful:):):)@ i'l try to be truthful<BR/>:)<BR/>:)<BR/>:)joie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-65927511256858961672009-02-11T05:04:00.001-08:002009-02-11T05:04:00.001-08:00@ bhargavthanks:)@ bhargav<BR/>thanks<BR/>:)joie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-41849010598553887822009-02-11T05:04:00.000-08:002009-02-11T05:04:00.000-08:00@ pinkumother tounge hai be hindi...itni toh aati ...@ pinku<BR/>mother tounge hai be hindi...itni toh aati hai<BR/>tujhe seekhna hai..chal mil online aaj se classes shuru<BR/>:Pjoie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-50516917853915589712009-02-11T05:03:00.000-08:002009-02-11T05:03:00.000-08:00@ deludedand you are giving me new names.french to...@ deluded<BR/>and you are giving me new names.french toast...french fries<BR/>:P<BR/><BR/>thanxjoie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-79352253650262084942009-02-11T05:02:00.000-08:002009-02-11T05:02:00.000-08:00@ tinnigood to see you back :Dand thanks@ tinni<BR/>good to see you back :D<BR/>and thanksjoie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-80133584681522698562009-02-11T05:01:00.002-08:002009-02-11T05:01:00.002-08:00@ prakharbohot bohot dhanyawaad@ prakhar<BR/>bohot bohot dhanyawaadjoie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-58124288313371909712009-02-11T05:01:00.001-08:002009-02-11T05:01:00.001-08:00@ amirtathank you dear@ amirta<BR/>thank you dearjoie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-38520061161604375602009-02-11T05:01:00.000-08:002009-02-11T05:01:00.000-08:00@ hobo:)@ hobo<BR/>:)joie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-58432902115356130402009-02-11T05:00:00.000-08:002009-02-11T05:00:00.000-08:00@ hemzzarre yarr...kitni mehnat karni padegi..@ hemzz<BR/>arre yarr...<BR/>kitni mehnat karni padegi..joie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-85654204990164337982009-02-11T04:59:00.000-08:002009-02-11T04:59:00.000-08:00@ pranavaare kaha yaarr..jyada tarif an kar..mein ...@ pranav<BR/>aare kaha yaarr..jyada tarif an kar..mein udne lagungi.. <BR/>:P<BR/><BR/>shukriyajoie de vivrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14255853748046469056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-81503253458221706482009-02-11T02:22:00.000-08:002009-02-11T02:22:00.000-08:00oh my god !i'm in love with your blog and your wri...oh my god !<BR/>i'm in love with your blog and your writing! <BR/>It's great re!<BR/>:)<BR/>Keep it up!PhilO♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/02754122680372548153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-55259028387915837672009-02-11T01:43:00.000-08:002009-02-11T01:43:00.000-08:00the idea behind the poem is good..gr8 job..however...the idea behind the poem is good..<BR/>gr8 job..<BR/>however the critic inside me couldn't resist observing a few scopes for improvement. Have listed them below:<BR/>1. Not sure if 'chhalti' is the right word..chhalna means dhokha dena...i guess u wanted to use 'chhalakti' <BR/>2. On reading the first line, i felt a tinge of uneasiness. "boond pade jo pani ki". Now even if i dint have the pic for reference, the following lines wud easily have told me that its paani....<BR/>rather than telling that its a paani ki boond, the line can be beautified by giving the boond an adjective...jus an opinion..<BR/>3. the two lines ending with 'me' in between cud have been avoided..they break the flow of poem..how bout - <BR/>"rookhe pag jo badhte jaayein<BR/>sookhi dharti ki pyaas bujhaaye"GajabKhopdihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16901761222312719098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-35329463448444474112009-02-10T23:33:00.000-08:002009-02-10T23:33:00.000-08:00Beautiful............Beautiful............digant sutarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18187329744603241212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8517328576888454516.post-66547808090206723042009-02-10T19:29:00.000-08:002009-02-10T19:29:00.000-08:00"gagri teri chalti jay " :)"gagri teri chalti jay " :)I'll try 2 be truthfulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09062558923773524259noreply@blogger.com